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taken on the last morning of excercise at bramley training ground, as part of our JTEX.

only taken with a shitty point and click samsung thing, wish i had taken my slr now.

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Username:v4forlife v4forlife
Uploaded:13 Feb 2008 - 2:50 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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Chrism8
Chrism8  7745 forum posts England14 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2008 - 3:19 PM

Under the circumstances, a really good shot, may be worth playing in PS or similar and reducing the exposure to darken everything a bit more or try to reduce the highlights. HTH

Chris

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dark_lord Critique Team 101475 forum postsdark_lord vcard England130 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2008 - 7:02 PM

Moving to the left and a little closer to make good use of the strong shadows from the men would have resulted in more impact. Mon's the right choice though!

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Paul Morgan
Paul Morgan e2 Member 1315379 forum postsPaul Morgan vcard England6 Constructive Critique Points
18 Feb 2008 - 8:01 PM

Not bad and quite atmospheric, the lighting works very well here.

I would simply crop out the area of black far right.

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