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The York busker again. (I warn you, you’re in for a long haul with these.) This chap came tearing round the corner, spotted the pianist and did a double-take.
A number of people expressed preference for colour over the last couple of days - you have the choice here, but for me black & white concentrates attention on the things that matter and reduces the distractions of shop windows etc.
If you have time, please view Large.
Thanks for looking,
Moira

Camera:Nikon D40 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikkor 18-55mm Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Recital 1
Username:mrswoolybill mrswoolybill
Uploaded:29 Apr 2008 - 7:33 AM
Tags:Black & white, Busker, Musician, Photo journalism, Pianist, Street photography, Surprise, York
Votes:89
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AlanBW
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England
29 Apr 2008 - 7:39 AM
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Excellent capture Moira, you caught the chap's double take really well - the mono version appeals more to me

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fentiger
29 Apr 2008 - 7:43 AM
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A very well timed capture Moira and with this one I do think that the BnW version is the most effective. Personally I would have cropped out the bit of window etc. at the top and the sky, side of the shop window etc. on the RH side. Smile

Albert

gerdoms
29 Apr 2008 - 7:48 AM
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moira you are becoming if you not already (you know what i mean) very accomplished at spotting these. i am with you on the bnw finish its more timeless & avoids loosing the subject to background distractions. bet he has a problem carrying that home every night!

gerry

Badgerfred
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29 Apr 2008 - 8:05 AM
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Excellent image Moira, very slight preference for V2,
Fred.

This is wonderful Moira.
Love the facial expression of the passer by.
I prefer the colour version, not for the shop window, but for those wonderful aubergine coloured trousers of the passer by & the blue of the caster wheels on the piano.
Also, you can see all the wonderful detail of that really old piano, especially the lid.
Amazing.
Hilary

Scottishlandscapes
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29 Apr 2008 - 8:06 AM
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Certainly slowed this guy in his tracks.

All the very best
Dougie

danbrann
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29 Apr 2008 - 8:14 AM
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Looks as f he is doing the quick step or maybe the goose step even.

ChristineL
29 Apr 2008 - 8:15 AM
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Your great timing tells the story beautifully, a lovely candid,
Chris.

MickyMc
29 Apr 2008 - 8:17 AM
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Great candid, line dancer perhaps??
Mavis

why is it that mono works so well with shots like these. As always a lesson for everyone in street photography. Well done Moira

rgds
Dave

mrswoolybill
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29 Apr 2008 - 8:22 AM
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Thanks everybody, I'm very interested in the feedback. I've added a crop as suggested by Albert, can't quite make up my mind about it. It's more focused but also more claustrophobic to me.
Moira

I do like the respectable looking chap on the right and his stance. I wonder what venerable organ he is carrying under his arm...
Smile Lucy

peugeot406
29 Apr 2008 - 9:03 AM
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Great image you captured the moment
Brian

Hoffy
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29 Apr 2008 - 9:06 AM
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I think most of us would, good B&W

Nice image Moira, well captured he is making sure you don't miss his buckets.
Dougie.

jaktis
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29 Apr 2008 - 9:14 AM
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Agree about the facial expression, it is a great composition with so much going on

Peter

Moira, You are clearly on a roll here with these. They are really very good indeed. Definitely No.1 on this one by a long way.

The timing with the double take chap is both brilliant and comical.

Cheers, Ken.

RysiekJan
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29 Apr 2008 - 10:12 AM
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V3 does it for me.

Rgds

Richard

Gaucho
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29 Apr 2008 - 10:20 AM
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Version 3 for me. Definitely prefer it in B/W. Your timing with the gent on the right is spot on. You'll do well to better this.
Malcolm

Herge88
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29 Apr 2008 - 10:27 AM
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I love the expression on the beardies face (no offence Bill) a great opportunistic shot moira.

Best Matt

Rende
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29 Apr 2008 - 10:35 AM
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Beautifully composed candid with wonderful poses. I agree that B&W is best; V1 for me.
Rende

Cormy
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England
29 Apr 2008 - 10:43 AM
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Despite the little bit of bald sky I really prefer your original composition in colour.The extra bit just adds a little bit more interest for me.Thought your legs looked superb in your yellow dress !!!
Cheers
Alan

dianah
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29 Apr 2008 - 10:44 AM
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I thought most would prefer mono Moira..I love the colour..I think I must be a colour person ! Great shot..and busking with a piano as well. When I retire perhaps I should try it !
Di

wyatturp
29 Apr 2008 - 10:57 AM
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Super picture

DougSmile

Nettles
29 Apr 2008 - 12:20 PM
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Nice capture and very good candid shot. Love the expression.
Annette

GalleryGirl
29 Apr 2008 - 12:36 PM
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He looks like he's doing a little jig!
Super capture.
Marilyn x

BlueRoom
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29 Apr 2008 - 12:49 PM
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How well you have caught this odd moment. Lots of life and a great sense of place.

Eric

taggart
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29 Apr 2008 - 12:49 PM
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V 3 and I think you are correct here about color being the right choice-- Jennnnnn

Richsr
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29 Apr 2008 - 12:51 PM
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A well timed capture Moira, agree with the B/W focusing you in - but still like the colour version as my preference.
Regards Richard.

TelStar
29 Apr 2008 - 1:14 PM
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Love the timing and the glance; also the piano busking idea. He'd get my money for effort alone.

Prefer the B&W but I might have cropped below the shop alarm to cut out the light patch, but keep the corner plus bikes and concentrate more on the figure's movement.

Tel*

mikbee
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29 Apr 2008 - 1:38 PM
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A good capture of ''stopping'' the guy in his tracks here Moira.He does look like he is going somewhere in a hurry.A suitable linear BG too.Nice one.
Mick.

newy17
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29 Apr 2008 - 2:18 PM
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wow Moira this is just fantastic superb timing version 3 is the winner here great work..
ian

glyndwr
29 Apr 2008 - 2:19 PM
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I do like the colour version Moira, it seems that the image comes to life. ( not sure if that sounds right, do apologise)

Robert

proz
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29 Apr 2008 - 2:28 PM
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really like the mono and think the tighter crop of v3 is the best. great even tones Moira.

imagio
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England1 Constructive Critique Points
29 Apr 2008 - 2:41 PM
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Hard to choose which is best Moira, But I like no 3 the best, like the way the passer by is maybe checking if its a pianola!

Bernie

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29 Apr 2008 - 3:22 PM
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I like the expression of the bearded man and his leg movement. Quite funny. JNC

JudeC
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England3 Constructive Critique Points
29 Apr 2008 - 3:22 PM
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Hi Moira - the colour version for me! - Jude.

TyChee
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29 Apr 2008 - 4:17 PM
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Love that guy's expression. Excellent shot.
Ty

imander
29 Apr 2008 - 4:48 PM
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i'm not even gonna mention a bit of selective colouring..oh no i'm not...Wink, really well captured, love his twist to his body as if he wasn't gonna stop but just had to....
ian

GlynnisFrith
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29 Apr 2008 - 4:54 PM
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Great candid & yes colour for me
Glynnis

willgriffiths
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29 Apr 2008 - 4:57 PM
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3 Fab candid love the 3.
Will

samsalt1
29 Apr 2008 - 5:09 PM
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Its colour for me and preferably with just the removal of the upper windows as the side does allow a bit more required space.

Sam

nickyv32
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29 Apr 2008 - 5:16 PM
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That Albert, he needs sorting. I prefer No 2 without the crop to be honsest, great colours, clean, sharp shot. Great photo.

Nicky

TonyFrith
29 Apr 2008 - 5:38 PM
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And I always thought it was women who crossed their leg's LOL
Super capture
Tony

lifesnapper
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29 Apr 2008 - 5:51 PM
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This time it's the colour version I like most Moira. Nice shot this.

John Smile

pascalg
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29 Apr 2008 - 5:54 PM
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sorry : colour for me...
would miss the Woolybill blue Wink
as a tourist, I'm more into this atmosphere...

kanu
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India
29 Apr 2008 - 5:57 PM
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V2 is the best, but the tighter crop in no.3 makes the composition better.

Bodiewil
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29 Apr 2008 - 7:35 PM
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Superbly captured Moira love that passerby..... Stunning work

Dave

riprap007
29 Apr 2008 - 7:39 PM
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v1 I think, love the body swerve!

rmr
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Wales
29 Apr 2008 - 8:16 PM
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lovely capture moira
mark

oldgreyheron
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29 Apr 2008 - 9:39 PM
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Super again Moira, but I still prefer the colour, for me it enlivens the image.

Mike

RobinF
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29 Apr 2008 - 9:57 PM
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Quote: but for me black & white concentrates attention on the things that matter

...you said it all for mono Moira (Mono Moira?) I love your B&W work and this is no exception. Just brilliant! - Robin

Hop-A-Long
29 Apr 2008 - 10:40 PM
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Another superb set of images Moira, I have enjoyed looking at your last few offerings and I must say, they are all excellent, especially the mono versions.
Andy

tigertimb
29 Apr 2008 - 11:27 PM
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Great candid and love his expression. Do like the tighter crop of #3 and good to see our star is no longer being ignored
Tim

Diana
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30 Apr 2008 - 1:15 AM
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what an excellent first class and somewhat bizarre capture

Dianna

peterboyce
30 Apr 2008 - 7:50 AM
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great picture.
peter

Love the double-take the passer by is giving, nicely captkured.

Graham

Nigel_95
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30 Apr 2008 - 10:14 AM
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Perfect timing Moira. I prefer B&W, but can't make up my mind between 1 & 3.

Nigel

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