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Title:RED
Username:caisiimao caisiimao
Uploaded:11 Feb 2012 - 9:12 AM
Camera:Canon EOS 1000D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:8 Feb 2012 - 11:09 AM
Tags:Flowers & plants, Red
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mhfore
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England148 Constructive Critique Points
11 Feb 2012 - 9:24 AM
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Hi Caisii,
I love this type of image it would make a good minimalist canvas but in my opinion only would work better in a portrait mode. In the mod I have set it on a pure black background and reduced the vibrantcy to reflect the time of year.

Nice shot Caisii. Smile

Martin

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Focus_Man
11 Feb 2012 - 10:22 AM
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This sprig certainly looks a little lonely and the space to both sides does seem to add to that. I would like to suggest that you consider a square crop for this kind of subject, I have therefore uploaded a mod with that aspect ratio and with the sprig rotated 30º left, to help fill the frame, for you to see what you think.

I like Martin's idea of giving a stretch to it to help it fill the frame, one to remember.

Frank

Last Modified By Focus_Man at 11 Feb 2012 - 10:23 AM
pamelajean
pamelajean (Critique Team)
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468 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1053 Constructive Critique Points
11 Feb 2012 - 9:33 PM
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You have chosen a nice colourful bit of foliage, have isolated it nicely, and kept a clean background.
I think there are several presentation possibilities with this, Caisii, and so I have done a modification with an idea of my own.
I placed the twig so that it emanates from the top right corner and gave it plenty of space beneath. There was strong light at the time of shooting, which has burnt out some parts of the colourful leaves, so I gave those spots a bit of colour. I adjusted levels until I was happy with the contrast, then burned a few bright spots in the background and softened it.
Pamela.

paulbroad
11 Feb 2012 - 9:48 PM
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And I would right crop to put it near the right side of the frame. Just shows how many different possibilities there are! You have done a fine technical job here.

Paul

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