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Taken at the Damian McGillycuddy studio in Manchester.

Brand:Olympus
Camera:Olympus OM-D E-M5
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:31 Dec 2011 - 11:00 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Aperture:f/6.3
Shutter Speed:1/200sec
ISO:200
Flash:On, Did not fire
Title:Red haired model
Username:sjh37 sjh37
Uploaded:17 Dec 2012 - 12:16 PM
Tags:Model, Portraits / people, Red hair
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parob
parob e2 Member 3parob vcard France72 Constructive Critique Points
17 Dec 2012 - 3:14 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

An absolutely striking portrait! The forcefulness of the model's facial expression is such that it carries the entire image, but, I must say it also has a lot to do with the portrait's colouration and the way your spots enhance it. The one tiny problem I find has to do with the subject's right shoulder. It protrudes so much that it almost looks clinical. I don't know if this aspect needs a little more work on the shadows to smooth it all, or maybe it is my eyesight. Regardless, I am really taken bythe way you have captured your model's beauty. Cheers,
Paul

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10911 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2909 Constructive Critique Points
17 Dec 2012 - 3:40 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Very attractive image. I agree with Pauls comments on the shoulder, but for me it includes the other shoulder as there is a slope downwards towards the front of the frame; the closeness of the front shoulder makes it appear rather large in comparison to the rear. You could likely crop to alter the impression, or a square crop with her head only?


regards


Willie

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