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Hello everyone!

Finally I'm uploading the redone image of "rest" which I've posted a week ago. Used all the methods you gave me to fix the wheel and some other spots I recognized were wrong.
Hope you like it as much as I do, It has now become one of my favorites Smile

Ayelet.

Camera:Olympus SP-560UZ
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Rest2
Username:Ayelet_A Ayelet_A
Uploaded:3 Dec 2008 - 9:50 AM
Tags:Digitally manipulated, Market place, People, Portraits / people
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Wide-eyed
Wide-eyed  10 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 9:54 AM

A wonderful, moody shot. Well done.

GRAHAM (zzzzzzzz)

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Silverzone
3 Dec 2008 - 10:08 AM

Super image. Sylvia

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RTDS
RTDS  6 Cyprus
3 Dec 2008 - 10:09 AM

Great capture and work done.
Like this one very much.
Well done.
Robert

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Graham_P
Graham_P  8 United Kingdom19 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 10:11 AM

Much better now Ayelet, the wheel is greatly improved.
Graham.

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 8481 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1077 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 10:13 AM

Excellent work, this is a great improvement and without the distraction of the wheel we can enjoy this for the very beautifully observed and composed shot that it is.
Moira

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AlanBW
AlanBW  8 England
3 Dec 2008 - 10:16 AM

Lovely work Ayelet; street photography is a definite strength in your repertoire - keep them coming!

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photophantom
3 Dec 2008 - 10:18 AM

Excellent!

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CarolG
CarolG e2 Member 8141 forum postsCarolG vcard Greece18 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 10:19 AM

Excellent, Ayelet. Carol

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DOGSBODY
DOGSBODY  61432 forum posts England30 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 10:23 AM

A very well observed and captured candid street scene. Andy

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Rock
Rock e2 Member 12Rock vcard England2 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 10:24 AM

The first shot was alright !

As is this.

Rock

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bliba
bliba  9 Austria2 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 10:36 AM

like this better now Ayelet..a great street photography

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BigSausage
3 Dec 2008 - 11:41 AM

Lovely image.

Thanks for your comments!

Paul

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lonely_oryx
lonely_oryx e2 Member 761 forum postslonely_oryx vcard England54 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 12:32 PM

It is definitlely better

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cassiecat
cassiecat  639 forum posts England46 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 12:57 PM

looking good, what did you do to remedy the wheel? lesley

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Ayelet_A
Ayelet_A  6 Israel3 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 1:30 PM


Quote: Looking good, what did you do to remedy the wheel? lesley

Thanks Lesley. I reselected the painted areas, turned them b\w with gray scale and used blur and copy to fix the shape.
Than I returned to my original shot, picked out the wheel with the magic tool (this time more carefully) and them copied it to the b\w image making it look stronger.

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Ayelet_A
Ayelet_A  6 Israel3 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 1:33 PM

Thanks everyone so much for coming back and spending the time to review my image. Couldn't have done it without your help, so thank you for that, especially to Moira and Pamela for their very useful advices.

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Ayelet_A
Ayelet_A  6 Israel3 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 1:33 PM


Quote: Lovely work Ayelet; street photography is a definite strength in your repertoire - keep them coming!

Thanks Alan! That comment made my day Grin Grin Grin

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Scaramanga
Scaramanga e2 Member 737 forum postsScaramanga vcard United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 1:54 PM

Really great treatment.

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pascalg
pascalg e2 Member 737 forum postspascalg vcard France
3 Dec 2008 - 4:12 PM

very good work ;
[already liked the previous,]
this one is an improvement of a good photo...

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IFIMAGE
IFIMAGE  6143 forum posts Wales
3 Dec 2008 - 5:45 PM

Great Image

Ian....

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dmhuynh72
dmhuynh72 e2 Member 628 forum postsdmhuynh72 vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 5:50 PM

great work Ayelet, i like the blurring and mono effects around the man which which forces you to focus on the man. nicely done. The lighting on the man is great, giving excellent clarity to the image.
regards
yung

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Roly
Roly  7 Wales
3 Dec 2008 - 8:29 PM

This is superb Ayelet.Well done indeed.

Roly.

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norton
norton  10 United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 8:47 PM

Great image Ayelet,nice work...............

Tony.

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Gezina
Gezina  8 United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 9:01 PM

You've done very well here- time and effort well spent - would be nice to have the other shot as a variant - easier to compare Ina

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RockArea
RockArea e2 Member 8RockArea vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 10:11 PM

Great improvement Ayelet. Tidied up nicely.

David

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Ayelet_A
Ayelet_A  6 Israel3 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 10:52 PM

Thank you all so much Grin


Quote: would be nice to have the other shot as a variant - easier to compare Ina

Unfortunately I don't have the variants option as I'm not an E2 member.
But if you'd like the previous upload is on my first page of PF only a row below this one.

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DP_Imagery
DP_Imagery e2 Member 10DP_Imagery vcard Wales6 Constructive Critique Points
3 Dec 2008 - 11:16 PM

Yep - you know I really liked the first one . . . but your improvements are spot on and so we have an even more excellent image - well done Grin

Bruce

And agree with the comment about your prowess at capturing street images with feeling.

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Ayelet_A
Ayelet_A  6 Israel3 Constructive Critique Points
4 Dec 2008 - 10:49 AM

Thank Bruce - that has made my day, today Grin

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Stace e2 Member 6Stace vcard England2 Constructive Critique Points
4 Dec 2008 - 11:40 AM

Lovely capture, well re-worked Smile

Stace

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jdenman
jdenman  6 Spain5 Constructive Critique Points
4 Dec 2008 - 12:32 PM

Cracking work this, the lighting is excellent.
John

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ugly
ugly e2 Member 6ugly vcard United Kingdom56 Constructive Critique Points
4 Dec 2008 - 3:41 PM

Very nice shot...
I think I can see a big inprovment in your work...
Well done..

Dave

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