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One of a series of shots of Richard Whitehead in the warm-up for his 100 metre heat.

Wanted to get a shot of him on his own walking back up to his blocks.

I think this was the best of a small bunch but still think the track is a bit overexposed, although not entirely sure how to change this and not affect the rest of the image?!

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 500D
Lens:EF75-300mm f/4-5.6
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:7 Sep 2012 - 10:11 AM
Focal Length:300mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.7
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/2500sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:As Shot
Title:Richard Whitehead
Username:zigga zigga
Uploaded:4 Oct 2012 - 9:26 AM
Tags:Athlete, Athletics, Paralympics, Running, Sports / action
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iancrowson
iancrowson e2 Member 4209 forum postsiancrowson vcard United Kingdom128 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 10:32 AM

I have done a mod. I darkened the highlights and lightened the shadows a touch using photoshop. images-adjustments-shadow/highlights. Not too good a mod really as I created a sort of halo/light area behind him. I'm not sure yours needed a mod.
You must be pleased with your capture of a star, good one, Ian

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iancrowson
iancrowson e2 Member 4209 forum postsiancrowson vcard United Kingdom128 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 10:43 AM

If you shoot in RAW there is more chance of correcting overexposed / underexposed areas (such as you feel the track is) using the sliders in Adobe RAW or Cannon RAW converters without introducing other artifacts/problems. I'm pretty sure you would have been able to deal with the brightness of the track and shadow of his face and shorts much better if starting in RAW where more detail is recorded and saved by the camera. You can then work with those details to get the result you want.
Ian

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zigga
zigga  1 United Kingdom
4 Oct 2012 - 11:01 AM

Hi Ian,

Thanks for the comments and for producing the mod. I tend to shoot RAW most of the time so the original image was a RAW file before being converted.

I think I probably need to brush up on my PS skills and may have a go at changing this following your suggestions.

I have to say I was extremely happy with the capture, especially from where I was sat... Grin

Michael

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom840 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 4:01 PM

Interesting image but THE shot here is his figure, a full shadow and the track.

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pamelajean Critique Team 8748 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1575 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 6:45 PM

I couldn't help thinking the same as Paul, Michael, the shadow was obviously strong, and including it would have given you a marvellous shot. Maybe there was something in the way that prevented you being able to include it.
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zigga  1 United Kingdom
4 Oct 2012 - 8:29 PM

Yeah, unfortunately we were sat behind 3 flag poles and I had already cropped one out to get this image which was a real shame. I hadn't actually considered the shadow before but will remeber that for next time, thanks.

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Davesumner
5 Oct 2012 - 4:57 AM

Hi michael,

No words about the wrong time of day or harsh shadows etc from me, he wasn't going to hang around until sunset for you so you got what you got. This image for me comes under the banner of photo-journalistic regardless of why you took it. I would suggest that turning this to a B&W image might work better for you.

I have uploaded a mod where I darkened the background slightly but left the person as they were. I then dodged them and their shadow, turned the image to B&W and then sharpened.

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hope this helps

DaVeS

Last Modified By Davesumner at 5 Oct 2012 - 4:59 AM

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10777 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2779 Constructive Critique Points
5 Oct 2012 - 2:02 PM

The track isnt really overexposed, - though the white lines are. If you want it a little darker, you need to know how to use layers and a layer mask in Photoshop, and you can find tutorials on this here on EPZ in Techniques and videos, or just Google.


Ive uploaded a mod which also has a white balance change, with the track a little darker.



Regards


Willie

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banehawi
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5 Oct 2012 - 2:20 PM

Ive uoloaded a second mod with Richard brightened. He is slightly underexposed in the original shot which contributes to making the trach look overexposed. Mod2 then has both a brighter Richard and a darker track.



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Willie

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