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used my tripod for this one

ISO100
F22
Exposure for 10s

My first real attempt at showing motion in the water...comments and suggestions welcome! Thanks for looking Smile

Camera:Pentax K10D Check out PENTAXPORTAL!
Lens:18-55mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:River
Username:kozway kozway
Uploaded:9 May 2008 - 4:58 AM
Tags:Humour / fun, Landscape / travel, Wildlife / nature
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Boyd
Boyd  1011213 forum posts Wales11 Constructive Critique Points
9 May 2008 - 7:04 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Looks a little underexposed to me. The image is there and compositionally it works. The twig in the LH corner is a little distracting.
Next time don't stop down so much, try f16 where your lens will be sharper and try to get the exposure so that the histogram is pushed up to but not over the right hand side.
I've added a mod to try and illustrate what I mean.

Last Modified By Boyd at 9 May 2008 - 7:05 AM

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kozway
kozway  6 Canada
9 May 2008 - 10:04 AM

cool thanks! I will try that again tomorrow weather permitting!@

cheers

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thearmsofvenusdemilo

Boyd has pretty much nailed the critque, Ive added a mod to let you see how you can play a bit in photoshop. Nice one Matt.

Colin

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kozway
kozway  6 Canada
9 May 2008 - 6:33 PM

Thanks alot fellas, every little bit helps. I really love photography and I love learning and getting better!

Cheers,

Matt

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