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used my tripod for this one
ISO100
F22
Exposure for 10s
My first real attempt at showing motion in the water...comments and suggestions welcome! Thanks for looking 
| Camera: | Pentax K10D |
| Lens: | 18-55mm |
| Recording media: | JPEG (digital) |
| Title: | River |
| Username: | 
kozway |
| Uploaded: | 9 May 2008 - 4:58 AM |
| Tags: | Humour / fun, Landscape / travel, Wildlife / nature |
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Looks a little underexposed to me. The image is there and compositionally it works. The twig in the LH corner is a little distracting.
Next time don't stop down so much, try f16 where your lens will be sharper and try to get the exposure so that the histogram is pushed up to but not over the right hand side.
I've added a mod to try and illustrate what I mean.
Boyd has pretty much nailed the critque, Ive added a mod to let you see how you can play a bit in photoshop. Nice one Matt.
Colin
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