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Wakefield Riverside opposite the Hepworth

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D7000 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18.0-105.0 mm f/3.5-5.6
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:26 Jan 2012 - 2:04 PM
Focal Length:30mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.1
Aperture:f/29.0
Shutter Speed:1/6sec
Exposure Comp:-1.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Riverside
Username:woodyp woodyp
Uploaded:1 Feb 2012 - 9:31 PM
Tags:Digially manipulated, Digital art, Digitally manipulated, Landscape, Wakefield
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sludge1969
sludge1969 e2 Member 4sludge1969 vcard England
1 Feb 2012 - 9:48 PM

Nice shot . Great detail and colours well done .

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paulbroad
paulbroad e2 Member 789 forum postspaulbroad vcard United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
2 Feb 2012 - 8:47 AM

Some idea of what you have done would help. It's a bit too heavy for me - I applaud the attempt, but very dark. Something of a halo round the building too - could be HDR?

Paul

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woodyp
woodyp e2 Member 7woodyp vcard United Kingdom
2 Feb 2012 - 12:44 PM

Cheers will look at the rotation.

Paul - it isn't an HDR as such I was playing around with a technique I'd seen a tutorial on loading in several versions of the same flat image as smart objects from camera raw. It involved trying to maximise the detail using a merged combination of inverted image blur and Topaz Detail to sharpen.

This seemed to pull out a lot of detail that wasn't apparent in the original I finished it off with a bit of pop using Topaz Adjust. It was a bit of an experiment really but I thought I'd post the result for comments.

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woodyp
woodyp e2 Member 7woodyp vcard United Kingdom
2 Feb 2012 - 12:48 PM

Ah also I added a graduated contrast/brightness filer to darken the sky, may have inadvertently caused the glow on the building with my mask edits

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10988 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2984 Constructive Critique Points
2 Feb 2012 - 4:58 PM

The halo is caused by over sharpening as far as I can see. Its also visible in other parts f the image.

The straight original image could be fine with the rotation. You can upload it still as a modification here if you like so we can compare and perhaps give you some more ideas.


The overall effect is very much an HDR style, though arrived at by a different route


Willie

Last Modified By banehawi at 2 Feb 2012 - 5:00 PM

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