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Wow, I took this picture nearly 5 years ago. They grow so fast.

Anyway, this is my nephew Rowern, he was a cheeky little monkey back then, mind you nothing changes.

I havnt realy done any editing apart from tweek on the channels to bring the right white and black points in, removed some dust on his black colour, then added the border.

It might be worth asking the pro's to have a go, see how they would edit it. I tried allsorts and nothing seemed to improve the image.

Anyway thanks again in advance on any comment, votes or modifications.

Gareth

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 400D
Lens:EF50mm f/1.8
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:8 Dec 2007 - 3:00 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.8
Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/200sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Partial
Flash:On, Fired
White Balance:As Shot
Title:ROWERN
Username:gareth01422 gareth01422
Uploaded:27 Nov 2012 - 8:07 PM
Tags:Flash / lighting, General, Humour / fun, Portraits / people
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Votes:5
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banehawi
banehawi (Critique Team)
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521 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2124 Constructive Critique Points
28 Nov 2012 - 5:05 AM
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Great expression, and thats what makes the shot. Cant improve on the expression, but youve asked for mods, loaded two.

Issues I addressed: composition has Rowern too low in the frame; red eye from the flash (very small, but visible); bright highlights from light above his head causing bright spots and shadows under his eyes; black frame doesnt suit the subject; sharpened eyes.
Mod2 is a soft diffused light version.

Over to you,


regards



Willie

Last Modified By banehawi at 28 Nov 2012 - 5:06 AM
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gareth01422
gareth01422 (e2 Member)
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213 forum postsgareth01422 vcard United Kingdom
28 Nov 2012 - 6:48 AM
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Cheers Willie

Thanks for the uploads.

I like them both

Gareth

Lillian
Lillian (e2 Member)
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Lillian vcard United Kingdom14 Constructive Critique Points
5 Dec 2012 - 8:01 AM
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Lovely portrait image and what a smile captured
like the mods too
Lillian

PinkK
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80 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
11 Dec 2012 - 1:40 PM
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Wonderful expression Smile

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