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Aug. 26 2012, Stovepipe Wells, Death Vally National Park

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 50D
Lens:EF17-40mm f/4L USM
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:30 Aug 2012 - 9:39 AM
Focal Length:17mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/22.0
Shutter Speed:1/6sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Custom
Title:Run Fay Run
Username:wupohan wupohan
Uploaded:12 Sep 2012 - 6:07 AM
Tags:General, Landscape / travel, Specialist / abstract, Wildlife / nature
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Focus_Man
Focus_Man  4481 forum posts United Kingdom631 Constructive Critique Points
12 Sep 2012 - 9:50 AM

I like the idea here with the dark and the footsteps leading to the rear and presumably nowhere!! However I do find it a little too dark (is it my monitor?) and accordingly will have a go at a mod where I will attempt to lighten it and denoise a little. I will also add a small border to highlight it rather than have it merge with the picture placement background. I think that the footsteps will still appear to recede into the distance.

Frank

Last Modified By Focus_Man at 12 Sep 2012 - 9:52 AM

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom843 Constructive Critique Points
12 Sep 2012 - 1:14 PM

Rather like this, but where is Fay? Possibly just needs the brightness lifting a bit. Simple often is best.

Paul

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2799 Constructive Critique Points
12 Sep 2012 - 4:35 PM

Very nice, like it a lot.

My suggestion would be to crop a lot from the bottom to start Fays footprints lower, which also places the apparent horizon on a third, and a very slight brighten as in the mod.




regards



Willie

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