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I went out on wed night to snap a bank of fog when the fog was retreating you will see it in the images .So these are what and tweaked a little.c&c valued

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Lens:16-85mm f/3.5-5.6 G VR
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:4 Jul 2012 - 7:31 PM
Focal Length:85mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.7
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/180sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:rural cottage
Username:williamsloan williamsloan
Uploaded:6 Jul 2012 - 11:40 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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paskinmj
paskinmj  5 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jul 2012 - 12:09 PM

Great series of captures.
Matt

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Fefe e2 Member 3Fefe vcard United Kingdom30 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jul 2012 - 1:16 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hello Billy, Nice set. I am presuming that V2 is the processed of V1, and that V4 is the processed of V3?
V2 is fine improvement on V1 so I have done a mod on V3 (I am presuming this is original) anyway, you have made some improvement in V4 but you have cropped away the over exposed sky which I feel affects the composition. So I have altered the exposure of the sky using the graduation curves of the histogram and fiddled with the saturation, colour balance and contrast till I felt happier with it. I then corrected the horizon a fraction, but it is hard to see the correct horizon for the mist ( this is not a critisim, the mist looks good) and finally gave a small sharpen. Hope you like it, and hope this helps. I have noticed a definate improvement in your images lately, good workGrin
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Irishkate e2 Member 4Irishkate vcard United Kingdom74 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jul 2012 - 7:32 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi Billy you cetainly have improved so much over the last few months.
I've even seen you give advice to other members and you noticed a dirt spot on one of my images.
I've done a mod on V1 today mainly from a compositional point of view.
I removed the vechicles just to tidy up image and cropped to put cottage on thirds.Grin
The image had great potential but I think you included just too much.
Last night a couple of members suggested a crop on my photo,
so sometimes we just miss what others see.
I'll leave it up to the experts and yourself to judge my mod.
KateGrin

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