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Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 500D
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:24 Jul 2011 - 4:19 PM
Focal Length:18mm
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/1250sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:rusty wire
Username:moo67 moo67
Uploaded:27 Jul 2011 - 11:20 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Wind turbine
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JPatrickM
JPatrickM  7 United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jul 2011 - 12:43 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I think you have too much information in this shot; it might have been better to concentrate on the wire and fence post without involving the turbines. There is marvellous texture on those posts, and impressive rust on the wire. The wind turbines are a distraction, and if you ever visit the site again a different view point may be worth trying.
Patrick

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Sooty_1
Sooty_1 Critique Team 41227 forum posts United Kingdom202 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jul 2011 - 9:51 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

If you can, go back later in the day so the light is less from the top and more from the side. This will enable you to make more of the textures on the post. As above, either forget about the turbines and concentrate more on the post, or take a slightly wider view so you get the whole post in the frame.

Also, look around the borders of the frame - that small tuft of greenery on the RHS is distracting.

Lots here to photograph if you look closely enough, on the large and small scale.

Nick

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Tooth
Tooth  95772 forum posts Ireland227 Constructive Critique Points
28 Jul 2011 - 11:39 AM

JPatrickM says "too much information" and I agree there is in the pic...but not enough in your description. It's hard to give constructive critique if wedon't know your intentions. As an exercise in depth of field? .. fine. As a juxtaposition of rustic and technological? not so good as I think the turbines would need to be in focus.

The elements of the pic IMO just don't fit well together in the same frame. Even the small clouds (and I am a lover of clouds) tensd to compete and drag the eye out of the pic

Sorry if it sounds harsh, just he way I see it

Stephen

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