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I took this shot in North Yorkshire while camping with a bunch of children. I really like her bread "smile".

Camera:Contax G2
Lens:Planar 45/2
Recording media:Tri-X 400
Title:Sadie
Username:jacksloan jacksloan
Uploaded:27 Oct 2009 - 8:57 AM
Tags:Black & white, Photo journalism, Portraits / people
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vickyal
vickyal e2 Member 6vickyal vcard United Kingdom
27 Oct 2009 - 9:18 AM

Lovely shot.
Vicky

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pulsar69
pulsar69  101611 forum posts United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
27 Oct 2009 - 9:40 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

love the shot , however the contrast could do with a lift or some adjustment to the curves , its a little flat and murky , would be an excellent shot then imho Smile

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jacksloan
jacksloan e2 Member 5jacksloan vcard United Kingdom
27 Oct 2009 - 9:43 AM

Thanks Pulsar. I've added contrast and uploaded an alternative version. Better?

Last Modified By jacksloan at 27 Oct 2009 - 9:45 AM

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riprap007 e2 Member 101568 forum postsriprap007 vcard England37 Constructive Critique Points
27 Oct 2009 - 10:04 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

this is such a strong image (and taken with one of the best cam / lens / film combinations around too Smile )
I think a crop to remove the sky would be useful (as suggested in the mod) for although this echoes and balances the white of the bowl is doesn't add too much (some context) and detracts from the excellent portrait (subject) higher contrasts help to give it a touch more punch

strong work

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EMJAYCEE e2 Member 5EMJAYCEE vcard England10 Constructive Critique Points
27 Oct 2009 - 1:12 PM

A much better image without the white sky.
Joan.

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pulsar69
pulsar69  101611 forum posts United Kingdom6 Constructive Critique Points
1 Nov 2009 - 10:14 AM

agreed ripra007 , works well without the sky and like the punch you have given it , great image in the first place made even better

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