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Another shot of my daughter Sarah, this time given a high key treatment

Brand:PENTAX Corporation
Camera:Pentax K10D Check out PENTAXPORTAL!
Lens:Sigma 18-125
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:11 Jul 2011 - 12:10 PM
Focal Length:68mm
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:125
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Sarah
Username:Alan_Baseley Alan_Baseley
Uploaded:18 Jul 2011 - 5:22 PM
Tags:Daughter, Digitally manipulated, Portraits / people, Sarah
Votes:32

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Kai_KaiAmydyer
18 Jul 2011 - 5:26 PM

gorgeous portrait, however i feel its just a tad too bright. i understand the effect you're trying to achieve however i feel like its just a tad too harsh in terms of making it brighter. maybe you can turn up the contrast to get the colour of Sarah's hair and t-shirt more vivid, it'll make it look less digitally edited and more natural Smile great shot Smile

Amy

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john_starkey
18 Jul 2011 - 5:35 PM

Nice sharp eye's but i do think it's a tad too over exposed,

John.

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franken
franken e2 Member 123135 forum postsfranken vcard Wales4 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jul 2011 - 5:51 PM

The high key treatment work well.

Ken

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Beverleycole
18 Jul 2011 - 6:15 PM

i agree nice portriat , but little too bright , nice pose though
beverley

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gingerdelight
18 Jul 2011 - 8:53 PM

I rather like this high key treatment although I realise it's not to everyone's taste. Wonderful focus on those lovely eyes too.
Carol

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mikbee
mikbee e2 Member 7mikbee vcard Scotland7 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jul 2011 - 11:54 PM

It can't be easy getting a high key look and not too bright too !!
Good effort here I reckon.
Mick.

Last Modified By mikbee at 18 Jul 2011 - 11:55 PM

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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England209 Constructive Critique Points
19 Jul 2011 - 11:18 AM

The eyes are good but for me the skin details and tones are blown, which is a shame. Preheps try this again but not as much with the sliders.
Regards Richard

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Louise_Morris e2 Member 42369 forum postsLouise_Morris vcard England
19 Jul 2011 - 11:49 AM

Its a great image but I do agree that it's just a touch on the bright side. Doesn't she have beautiful eyes - this brings them out really well. Lou

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