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broodind moody glasgow cityscape slightly heavy edit

Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:29 Apr 2012 - 1:37 PM
Title:SCAPE OF THE URBAN
Username:youmightlikethis youmightlikethis
Uploaded:2 May 2012 - 6:34 PM
Tags:Black & white, General, Landscape / travel
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RonnieAG
RonnieAG (e2 Member)
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111 forum postsRonnieAG vcard Scotland102 Constructive Critique Points
2 May 2012 - 6:48 PM
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Fine composition and your "heavy edit" has resulted in a very dramatic image of this newish bridge. The walkers are well placed in the scene, and the B and W presentation works well for me.
Ronnie.

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2 May 2012 - 7:28 PM
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Agree with Ronny.*****
Cor.

youmightlikethis
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926 forum postsyoumightlikethis vcard
3 May 2012 - 4:23 AM
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thanks

paulbroad
4 May 2012 - 10:57 AM
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I do like this one - the mono version - without the title though. There is a lot of impact and strength - streets in front of the colour version.

paul

SueEley
SueEley (e2 Member)
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250 forum postsSueEley vcard Wales93 Constructive Critique Points
5 May 2012 - 7:43 PM
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Like Ronnie, I think the composition is very good. The conversion does make the image a little information-rich, though. In my mod, I added a vignette, to try to focus the attention on the walkers more - I was finding my eyes moving around because of there being so many similar light tones. BTW there seem to be two circularish spots on your sky, one on a cloud and one on a blue sky bit - are these on your sensor, or tricks of the light? The one on the cloud is hardly visible on the colour version but is quite noticeable in the processed version. I have spots on my sensor which won't budge and have to spot my shots before processing.

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DRicherby
5 May 2012 - 9:11 PM
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Well spotted, Sue. Ther are certainly dust spots on this -- I've posted a mod with some definites ringed in red and some maybes in blue. Bryan Carnathan has a good sensor cleaning article on his site.

Dave.

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