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Looking down on Brighton seafront Trying for low light monochrome effect

Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony Cyber-shot DSC-W380
Lens:Fixed zoom
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:28 Nov 2010 - 1:54 AM
Focal Length:5.1mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.4
Aperture:f/7.1
Shutter Speed:1/500sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Seafront
Username:MIKEYMIKEY MIKEYMIKEY
Uploaded:18 Jan 2013 - 3:47 PM
Tags:Photo journalism, Portraits / people
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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom851 Constructive Critique Points
18 Jan 2013 - 4:07 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

The potential from this viewpoint is great. You need just one person, or a pair in that right black and white tiled area and no one else. The figures and shadows could then produce a very strong composition.

Paul

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Paintman e2 Member 8855 forum postsPaintman vcard United Kingdom173 Constructive Critique Points
19 Jan 2013 - 3:12 PM

I cropped the photo in the mod and converted it to a toned mono. The first mod was uploaded by mistake and is your original photo. OopsTongue I think Paul's suggestion is bang on.

Alan.

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