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I deleted the previous upload, people couldn't even look at itSad Just too gloomy1
This one Montmartre artist was obviously fed up with the lack of customers and gloomy weather but Montmartre never really loses its charm does it?

Camera:Canon EOS 5D
Lens:canon 17-40
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Seeking customers
Username:pennyspike pennyspike
Uploaded:24 Feb 2009 - 7:39 PM
Tags:Artist, Bad weather, General, Montmartre, Paris, Photo journalism, Portraits / people
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pennyspike
pennyspike  112068 forum posts United Kingdom29 Constructive Critique Points
24 Feb 2009 - 8:23 PM

Thanks for the mod, I like the crop and the treatment but I think it might be even better with the red behind him desaturated as well.
Penny

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Diana
Diana e2 Member 82011 forum postsDiana vcard Netherlands19 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2009 - 10:09 AM

Hi Penny, I think this does need a complete mono-over ..hope you had a great time and went to the wonderful graveyard in Montmartre too

Diana

Last Modified By Diana at 25 Feb 2009 - 10:10 AM

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pennyspike
pennyspike  112068 forum posts United Kingdom29 Constructive Critique Points
10 Mar 2009 - 12:16 PM

Thanks for the mods jonathanbp it's good to see how other people would work on a picture. The interesting thing to me is that the more I look at this pic the more I'm annoyed by the white menu stand behind his head. I really should have waited just that split second longer to get the shot.Smile
Penny

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paulcr
paulcr  101536 forum posts Ireland9 Constructive Critique Points
10 Mar 2009 - 12:37 PM

Hi Penny, I'm sure your well capable of it but I took the menu away Smile
Also some selective blurring and desaturation to bting the artist out of the shot. I left his scarf slightly more saturated than the awning, again , to bring him out.

Cheers
Paul

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pennyspike
pennyspike  112068 forum posts United Kingdom29 Constructive Critique Points
10 Mar 2009 - 12:40 PM

Thanks Paul, like it much better without the menu.Smile
PennySmile

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