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this is another of the same set I tried, i made it little grainy look, here the flash is less disturbing in my oppinion, I don't know about the pose, I hope it not boring.
thankyou as always for any advice

Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Self Portrait 2
Username:alessandra1990 alessandra1990
Uploaded:11 Jul 2009 - 10:04 AM
Tags:Nude / glamour
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HectorRivera
11 Jul 2009 - 10:07 AM

Very nice

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db-images  5 Scotland
11 Jul 2009 - 10:27 AM

The grain works well, I feel.

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kaybee
kaybee  103771 forum posts Scotland24 Constructive Critique Points
11 Jul 2009 - 10:33 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I like the sheen on your back and the shadows cast (nice dimples by the way).

The flash (to me) is not distracing in the least and actually adds to the shot because of the texture of the background it is falling on.
The glasses add a touch of glamour' to it all somehow ..... maybe it is the 'celebrity' thing of pretending to hide behind the sun glasses whilst wanting everyone to look at them.

As for the pose - boring?. Not at all. It goes with the lighting very well.

What I might be tempted to do is remove the light triangle above your head (I find that tends to pull he attention a tad)


Roy

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cambsman  5 Cyprus2 Constructive Critique Points
11 Jul 2009 - 1:09 PM

I'm jealous of the tan !

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lifesnapper e2 Member 8lifesnapper vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
11 Jul 2009 - 2:04 PM

I like the colouring and feel to this one. Nicely done.

John Smile

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aviaandy
aviaandy  736 forum posts4 Constructive Critique Points
11 Jul 2009 - 3:31 PM

A very good image, never boring, my one very small point as its a pet hate is there is a faint bra line across your back. An easy fix in PS. Me just being over picky, sorry.

Andy

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harrattp  7 England4 Constructive Critique Points
11 Jul 2009 - 5:48 PM

I think Kaybee sums it up nicely, as for the bra strap comment above; just remove underwear about one hour before your shoot and you will not have any more marks showing on your images.

Paul

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paulsimmons
11 Jul 2009 - 9:21 PM

I think self portraits are one of the most difficult shots to do. Lots of girls do fantastic sp's. You are very beautiful so dont give up. I learnt a lot about lighting by shooting myself, but i didn't publish the pics with my face LOL

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alessandra1990
12 Jul 2009 - 8:18 AM

thankyou so much everybody for your kind and very useful comments and suggestions Smile

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Phil1958  5272 forum posts Wales4 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jul 2009 - 12:07 AM

These images are really good and I like this one in particular, keep up the good work.

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kiddsta1
kiddsta1  6 Australia
16 Jul 2009 - 11:22 PM

Great shot like the sun glasses and a great body shape

Paul

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