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It was a cloudy New Year morning at the Manila Bay. My youngest son was very sad coz his Mom is working abroad, my eldest is in the province during that time. Him and I only celebrated new year 08 together that's why he was so lonely that time.

Hope you like the mono. I appreciated all your approval and corrections in the past, today, and future.

Good day my beloved Artists and Mentors.

I may not vote to all of you today due of my slow computer, I will surely drop by each everyone of you and give my words and votes.

Dennis

Camera:Sony
Lens:Carl Zeiss
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Separated
Username:photophantom photophantom
Uploaded:10 Mar 2008 - 3:46 AM
Tags:Architecture, Black & white, Children photography, Cloudy weather, Portraits / people
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dawnmichelle
dawnmichelle e2 Member 7dawnmichelle vcard United States
10 Mar 2008 - 3:54 AM

wonderful image.. just sad that he was so unhappy on that day... glad he had you to be with I am sure you were able to take the saddness away..

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Bob_V
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10 Mar 2008 - 4:21 AM

Great capture, like the tones in this, great work.
Bob

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MaryMac
MaryMac e2 Member 8258 forum postsMaryMac vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
10 Mar 2008 - 4:43 AM

Nice shot love the mono
I am sorry that your family is not together and I hope your son sees his Mummy soon
Mary

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photophantom
photophantom e2 Member 6108 forum postsphotophantom vcard Philippines3 Constructive Critique Points
10 Mar 2008 - 4:54 AM

Thank you respected Artists.

Yes Mary, my wife will coming soon. We plan to stay in New Zealand someday were other relatives are presently living. Thanks for your concern.

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Swati
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10 Mar 2008 - 5:05 AM

Nice shot.. But it is sad that the lil. one is missing his mom.. plss be with him... swati

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kanu
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10 Mar 2008 - 6:25 AM

That's a good one, oh yes.. I liked the mono.
Say Hi to your kids.

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imagio
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10 Mar 2008 - 7:45 AM

Great shot Dennis you have captured his sadness so well.

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costas
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10 Mar 2008 - 8:27 AM

Superb, your composition and dof is fantastic well done.

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bayleaf
bayleaf  7 United Kingdom
10 Mar 2008 - 8:32 AM

Super image this

John

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Ridgeway
Ridgeway  8222 forum posts Ireland2 Constructive Critique Points
10 Mar 2008 - 9:24 AM

Like the Mono,you will have to get a shot when he gets to be with his Mom again.

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DolphinLady
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10 Mar 2008 - 9:38 AM

The tones suit this image so well.
Would love to see it from the front angle sometime in the evening, with the lights lit.
Would also love to see your little boy with a lovely happy face, with his mum.....he looks so sad.
Hilary

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chrismar
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10 Mar 2008 - 9:58 AM

Nice photo, take care,,
Chris

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AlanBW
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10 Mar 2008 - 10:08 AM

Great capture of your son's sadness - he is so expressive

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photophantom
photophantom e2 Member 6108 forum postsphotophantom vcard Philippines3 Constructive Critique Points
10 Mar 2008 - 10:16 AM

Thank you Alan the great.

Thank you all my beloved Artists, I treasured all your words.
Dennis

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MickyMc
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10 Mar 2008 - 10:29 AM

Its a great shot with lots of interest sad words you wrote but I am glad to see there will be a happy ending. ( photographically and not really my business but could you clone the other people out to give a more empty feeling)
Mavis

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photophantom
photophantom e2 Member 6108 forum postsphotophantom vcard Philippines3 Constructive Critique Points
10 Mar 2008 - 10:36 AM

Thanks for your words Mavis. I understand your point about the other people out thereSmile
As the title: "Separated," If I didn't tell the story behind the expression of my son, anybody who see this image will think, that child is separated from other people. That's why I didn't removed those people. The image has double meaning.
Dennis

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panda
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10 Mar 2008 - 10:42 AM

Super shot, perfect in mono.

Regards Phil

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mikbee
mikbee e2 Member 7mikbee vcard Scotland7 Constructive Critique Points
10 Mar 2008 - 11:25 AM

Terrific lines and shapes here Dennis.Good comp' too.Good ''story'' too.
Mick.

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foggytwo
foggytwo e2 Member 1136 forum postsfoggytwo vcard Scotland1 Constructive Critique Points
10 Mar 2008 - 1:10 PM

A fine composition Dennis with the mono working very well.I like the title and the pose your son has adopted.Good shot.
Pete.

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10 Mar 2008 - 3:06 PM

Hope you will be together soon.
Geoff.

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dianah
dianah e2 Member 824474 forum postsdianah vcard United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
10 Mar 2008 - 4:10 PM

Love the mono Dennis and what a sad little face. Strong lines and curves..I hope that you will all be together again soon.
Di

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Cormy
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10 Mar 2008 - 4:21 PM

Nice one Dennis.He picked his spot well.
Cheers
Alan

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Rock
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10 Mar 2008 - 7:18 PM

B/W enhances the shot.

Rock

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jaktis
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10 Mar 2008 - 7:48 PM

Another great expression

Peter

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StevesPics
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10 Mar 2008 - 10:01 PM

Dennis, by placing your son in the corner you've obtained great composition in this shot. Love the strong shapes and dramatic looking sky. An all round great mono shot. Well done.
Take care.

Steve

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digiray63
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10 Mar 2008 - 11:31 PM

A wonderful shot and great mono.
Ray

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Andree_Borrel
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11 Mar 2008 - 12:20 AM

Dennis be proud, great positioning of your son making a fine mono shot

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photophantom
photophantom e2 Member 6108 forum postsphotophantom vcard Philippines3 Constructive Critique Points
11 Mar 2008 - 1:19 AM

Thanks to all your words of wisdom, I really appreciated it.
Dennis

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BrillacFr
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11 Mar 2008 - 6:40 AM

A great composition Dennis - you've really captured the sadness in his expression - hope mum comes back to you all soon
Charlotte

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cantona43
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11 Mar 2008 - 8:04 AM

wonderful shot nice expression on the boys face good detail and tones happy to be number 30 on this
Neil

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delboy1145
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11 Mar 2008 - 8:06 AM

I love the dramatic feel the mono gives this image and probably the colour version would not do it justice. Sometimes in a shame that other peoples feeling MAKE an image but credit to you you saw the potenial and took the shot, Least ways when mum came home she could see it to.
Keep on improving and you will soon be some-ones mentor

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photophantom
photophantom e2 Member 6108 forum postsphotophantom vcard Philippines3 Constructive Critique Points
11 Mar 2008 - 8:15 AM

Thank you Dave for inspirational words.
Thank you Neil, Cheers!Smile

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danbrann
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11 Mar 2008 - 8:25 AM

A good image Dennis but I agree it would be better to crop out the other people as they are somewhat distracting.Perhaps if you had you could have found a different title, but still a super picture and your work is improving already.

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photophantom
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11 Mar 2008 - 9:53 AM

Thanks Dan, I appreciated it.

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MickyMc
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11 Mar 2008 - 10:44 AM


Quote: Thanks for your words Mavis. I understand your point about the other people out thereSmile
As the title: "Separated," If I didn't tell the story behind the expression of my son, anybody who see this image will think, that child is separated from other people. That's why I didn't removed those people. The image has double meaning.
Dennis

Sorry I was just thinking he was separated from his Mum, now I see the double meaning - spot on
Mavis

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Mikelane
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11 Mar 2008 - 12:13 PM

Great image dennis well capt
Mike

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photophantom
photophantom e2 Member 6108 forum postsphotophantom vcard Philippines3 Constructive Critique Points
11 Mar 2008 - 1:10 PM

No big deal Mavis. I appreciated all words of wisdom.

Thanks didddroba01 for dropping by.

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tuhin
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11 Mar 2008 - 1:43 PM

Beautiful.

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Libby_M
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11 Mar 2008 - 4:52 PM

what a lovely shot

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JudeC
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11 Mar 2008 - 7:42 PM

Lovely image - sad that there was only the two of you - Jude.

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11 Mar 2008 - 9:02 PM

A wonderful shot, nice composition.
Una

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11 Mar 2008 - 10:01 PM

great mono well done love it

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12 Mar 2008 - 5:29 AM

Great B&W.
Ant

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12 Mar 2008 - 10:04 AM

Beautiful shot; very well composed.
Rende

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cheesey
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12 Mar 2008 - 12:46 PM

Cracking image. Excellent capture.
Cheesey.

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12 Mar 2008 - 8:04 PM

A lovely interesting Image Dennis excellent composition,
Alan

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12 Mar 2008 - 8:43 PM

Lovely work . I hope your lovely son is now happy again Dennis . xx

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monashort
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12 Mar 2008 - 10:06 PM

Very nice capture and presentation. Cute little guy, bet he has a great smile.
Mona

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Joline
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14 Mar 2008 - 12:44 PM

I'm trying to catch up after having been away for a few days. I like the way you have composed this, it really makes him look super alone.
As to suggestions, which I know you like, I would have tried to include the peak of the structure where your son is standing, and crop from the right up to the last structure to exclude the other people. Overall nice work, and I like the mono,.

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Brady23
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16 Mar 2008 - 12:28 AM

You have a good eye for composition - love this picture. nice shapes and shades.

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20 Mar 2008 - 3:14 PM

Excellent shot!
Ty

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21 Mar 2008 - 11:23 PM

Amazing capture. Ness

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Skye24Blue
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23 Mar 2008 - 7:50 AM

Excellent mono.
MAc

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