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Alda (e2 Member)

30 Dec 2012 - 2:33 PM

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I think this is amazing, the lighting is excellent! I agree with the light patches on the floor but other than that - superb

mugshotmyk

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30 Dec 2012 - 3:48 PM

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The lighting is just about right but I would give it a square crop as the lower shadowed section of the image is a distraction.

aviaandy

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30 Dec 2012 - 7:35 PM

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I love it as it is because it gives a sort of candid feel to it.

FionaB

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30 Dec 2012 - 9:31 PM

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Quote: This is an excellent shot, subtle lighting, and an example of less is more for sure.


I agree with all the above, - its an image that can work with many crops. The floor area is certainly better darker, - just paint in black.

What I find is that I would like a little more room between her head and the top of the frame, no matter how its cropped.


Ive loaded 3 mods, one from the suggestion made by Richard, and two more, one the original in a 19:6 format to move her head further from the top.



Well done,




Regards



Willie

Thanks for the mods, i really like the first and last one! makes a huge difference

paulbroad

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31 Dec 2012 - 11:37 AM

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This is rather nice. You don't say what the lighting was. Looks like a single toplight, possibly tungsten. For me, either crop to the top of the body, or add a littlr more light to the lower body. Not enough to detract from that on her face though.

Paul