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The last on of the shoot Smile Thanks,



Caitlin x

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 20D
Lens:28.0-135.0 mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:2 Jan 2012 - 1:33 PM
Focal Length:30mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/16.0
Shutter Speed:1/90sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Average
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Shannon 3
Username:Caitlin98 Caitlin98
Uploaded:6 Jan 2012 - 8:10 AM
Tags:Flash / lighting, General, Portraits / people
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woolybill1
woolybill1 e2 Member 7woolybill1 vcard United Kingdom65 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jan 2012 - 10:06 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

That was a really productive photoshoot!
Another classic pose including excellent eye contact.
The image overall would benefit from a little more space above and to the left. With the plain coloured background it would be easy to add some extra in software by increasing canvas size. You can keep the current proportions of the image by cropping from the right in compensation.
There is probably an 'official' artistic explanation; perhaps I should just say that you don't want to have your model looking too cramped.
Best wishes
Bill

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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84277 forum postsKarenFB vcard England163 Constructive Critique Points
6 Jan 2012 - 4:02 PM

Bill has made some valid points, but easily rectified. Just a few 'dust bunnies' here and there (again easily fixed). The colours are wonderful.

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jamestheboy
7 Jan 2012 - 2:47 PM

What a lovely portrait very well done






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