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I liked all the different colors and shapes blowing the wind on a Sunday afternoon.

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 G
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:2 Dec 2012 - 1:27 PM
Focal Length:45mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.3
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Not Defined
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Auto, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:shawls in the wind
Username:rtenny rtenny
Uploaded:25 Jan 2013 - 6:12 PM
Tags:Color, General, Market
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jadedhills
25 Jan 2013 - 10:53 PM

Nice photo even with the difficult lighting, maybe lift the colours lightly, apart fropm that well done. Grin

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Sooty_1
Sooty_1 Critique Team 41207 forum posts United Kingdom198 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jan 2013 - 1:32 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

You might want to consider cropping the people out, at least the green carrier bag.

It's well seen, just a shame the colours are muted and not vibrant, though this isn't the best angle for the light, and maybe a more front on shot would give you more frame-filling colour. You've caught more of the shadow side than the lit side by standing where you shot from.
Settings look fine though, just the position hasn't helped.

Nick

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom851 Constructive Critique Points
26 Jan 2013 - 10:20 AM

The colours are muted. Seems to be a faint blue cast but not showing in the whites. I find myself looking at the woman all the time, and, as such, I would have focused on her and made her the main subject. Trouble with this type of photography, there is little time, if any, to focus.

Paul

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rtenny
rtenny e2 Member 3rtenny vcard Spain
26 Jan 2013 - 2:15 PM

Thanks for the modification, colors are much better, and I agree I should have waited till that woman moved out of the frame. But market are so busy that you hardly get a shot without people moving in and out.

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