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Taken on a walk with my dogs using my Iphone 3GS

Brand:Apple
Camera:Iphone 3GS
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:30 Oct 2011 - 2:41 PM
Focal Length:3.9mm
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/120sec
ISO:125
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Average
Flash:No flash function
Title:Simply stunning
Username:NickStephens NickStephens
Uploaded:4 Dec 2011 - 6:20 PM
Tags:Flowers & plants, General, Wildlife / nature
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Peterpools
4 Dec 2011 - 7:43 PM

A beautiful and colorful mushroom but there is too much competing with it in the frame. i would have moved the mushroom up into the top half of the frame and cropped out some of the green leaves, This would have helped the viewer focus strictly on the mushroom. Exposure is very good. Just my two cents worth.
Peter

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Lynamick
Lynamick  12 United Kingdom31 Constructive Critique Points
4 Dec 2011 - 10:04 PM

Nice mushroom, it would have looked better if you had had the time to trim away some of the grass before taking the shot. A tighter crop would have made it a more powerful shot.
Hope I have helped.

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Jestertheclown
4 Dec 2011 - 10:32 PM

I've uploaded a mod. It's a much tighter crop with most of the foreground removed.
As Michael has said, this would benefit from a little "gardening", clearing away the odd bits of grass etc.
Also, there are a few strands straggling over the mushroom itself which could have been removed, either before you took the shot or if you'd missed one (we all do!) in software afterwards.
Hope this helps.

Bren.

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