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Sir John Betjeman, as sculpted by Martin Jennings, gazes at the roof of his beloved St Pancras - fighting to save the station and to hang on to his hat. I spent a while observing the delight and affection of travellers discovering him there. Everyone seemed so genuinely happy to see him.
Three different compositions - using square, vertical and landscape formats. Which works best?
If you have time, please view Large.
Thanks for looking,
Moira

Camera:Nikon D40 Check out Nikon Nation!
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Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Sir John
Username:mrswoolybill mrswoolybill
Uploaded:18 Mar 2008 - 7:55 AM
Tags:Architecture, John betjeman, London, Portraits / people, Railway station, Specialist / abstract, St pancras
Votes:85
Variant - TestsVariant - Tests

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JudeC
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18 Mar 2008 - 7:57 AM
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Good morning Moira - three great shots - V2 for me I think - Jude.

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jarendell
18 Mar 2008 - 8:09 AM
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V2 for me,works well in this format,V3 close behind

Badgerfred
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18 Mar 2008 - 8:13 AM
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V1 for me Moira, 3 nice compositions,
Fred.

lonely_oryx
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18 Mar 2008 - 8:13 AM
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Looks like he is raising his hat to the ladies

oldgreyheron
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18 Mar 2008 - 8:14 AM
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It's between #1 and #3 for me Moira... I think I have to go for the close up - I love the expression (but the context from the others helps a lot too!)

Mike

delboy1145
18 Mar 2008 - 8:18 AM
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No2 for impact No1 for composition just love the way the eye scans across the image to the four eurostar's waiting for the off

AlanBW
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18 Mar 2008 - 8:19 AM
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V1 for me, love the poses / expressions there

Version 2 is the one for me Moira.
This is a wonderful tribute to him, showing him hanging on to his battered old trilby.
The look on the ladies faces are a wonder to behold as they just gaze at him.
Hilary

MickyMc
18 Mar 2008 - 8:28 AM
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No 1 for me Moira its a real cracker, another of your best.
Mavis

gerdoms
18 Mar 2008 - 8:31 AM
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smashing trio of images again moira. kim walton went & its nice to see the difference in how you approached the place.

gerry

Great series. No.2 for me.

Paul

Barbaraj
18 Mar 2008 - 8:33 AM
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No 1 for me but would like the see a no 4 full height of him sideways.

Hoffy
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18 Mar 2008 - 8:44 AM
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I like No 1 and No 2

HI Moira
v2 for me by far
cheers
mike

Cormy
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18 Mar 2008 - 9:01 AM
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3 Crackers,particularly like No.2.
Cheers
Alan

mrswoolybill
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18 Mar 2008 - 9:06 AM
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Thanks everyone. I've added a sideways view for Barbara.

Bodiewil
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18 Mar 2008 - 9:12 AM
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Four cracking images Moira love no3 the angle is spot on

Dave

TelStar
18 Mar 2008 - 9:25 AM
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Aha! I was wondering when we'd get some shots of this. A good angle, Moira, nicely composed; the sequence tells a delightful tale of which I'm sure JB would have approved. Smile

I took shots of 'him' recently too. I think the sculptures and the revamp here are great.

Tel*

Last Modified By TelStar at 18 Mar 2008 - 9:26 AM

No 2 has the interaction for me. Another cracker.

Alan

dianah
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18 Mar 2008 - 9:42 AM
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Excellent Moira in every way..I am glad that you incorporated the last one..the two ladies have obviously seen enough and are on their way..an excellent end shot.
Di

Barbaraj
18 Mar 2008 - 10:12 AM
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Thank you for no 4.

franken
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18 Mar 2008 - 10:25 AM
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I like them all!

Ken

bricurtis
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18 Mar 2008 - 10:49 AM
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It's a great sequence of images.I think V2 andV4 tell the story - the viewing and the leaving.
I wonder what they thought of the great man.

mikbee
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18 Mar 2008 - 11:13 AM
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Square for me Moira.The lady in red seems to be following the MANS gaze.Like V4 for the ladies ''retreat'' and the ''rustic'' colour to the building.Once again,Nice ones.
Mick.

Joline
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18 Mar 2008 - 11:47 AM
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I like v1 and v4 especially. v4 gives me a much better idea of the statue, and therefore I think it's my favorite.

jaktis
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18 Mar 2008 - 12:01 PM
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I prefer #1

Peter

DolphinLady
18 Mar 2008 - 12:05 PM
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Had to come back to visit the old man once again, to find that you have uploaded another version of him...Fantastic
Hilary

helenlinda
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18 Mar 2008 - 12:10 PM
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Lovely collection of images Moira. Interesting to see them move from looking at him, to looking with him at the roof
Helen

dawnmichelle
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18 Mar 2008 - 12:21 PM
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2 and 4 for me.. however what a great set of images..

proz
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18 Mar 2008 - 12:53 PM
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4 good shots Moira, I like the wide take of #1 the best.

Andys0707
18 Mar 2008 - 1:25 PM
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great shots moira, i like all four variations but 2 for me, andys0707

fentiger
18 Mar 2008 - 1:44 PM
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Great character was Sir John! Excellent set of candids which blend together extremely well.

Albert

Scottishlandscapes
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18 Mar 2008 - 1:53 PM
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1& 4 for me Moira but it's all down the personal preference in the end, they are all of course good, a very nice set, on a great man of the day. Wonderful work my friend.

All the very best
Dougie

willgriffiths
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18 Mar 2008 - 1:56 PM
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Well done fab 4 very good.
Will

imander
18 Mar 2008 - 2:25 PM
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superbly captured set of a superb piece of sculpture, i particualy like the last one.
ian

peugeot406
18 Mar 2008 - 3:16 PM
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Excellent images, v2 for me
Brian

Richsr
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18 Mar 2008 - 3:40 PM
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Like these Moria - nice captures of an impressive sculptor. Well captured.
Regards Richard

Rock
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18 Mar 2008 - 4:04 PM
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A very infomative visual series .

Rock

glyndwr
18 Mar 2008 - 4:35 PM
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V1 best for me, there is one lady captivated, the other couldn't care less in this shot.
Wicked, have you and Bill ever stopped in the street looking up at nothing just to get others to do the same?

Robert

pascalg
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18 Mar 2008 - 5:26 PM
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interesting sculpture ; was surprised to see a square in the thumbnail Smile
I do like the format variations here : different moods
vertical #2, what else ? seen the way she imitates his arm position ? Wink

AngelaR
18 Mar 2008 - 5:38 PM
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Hi Moira - nice to see the series you've made here. You certainly found an interesting pair to be in the picture with Sir John.

Miss J Hunter Dunn...
Now those were the days when Poet laureates were real poets... None of this modern motion twaddle!
I love the way (a)one of the ladies mimics his holding on to his hat (with her wig?) and (b) the olde dearies leave in the final picture.
I spotted another statue in #3 - I shall be disappointed if we don't see more of it!
Smile Lucy

mrswoolybill
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18 Mar 2008 - 6:15 PM
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Sadly, I didn't get to take any pictures of The Lovers, Lucy. We arrived at King's Cross and begged a few minutes to walk across to St P to inspect the renovation - but our daughter was starting to mutter on 'What have I let myself in for...' lines, so I put the camera away and we went homewards.
Moira

Last Modified By mrswoolybill at 18 Mar 2008 - 6:15 PM
lifesnapper
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18 Mar 2008 - 6:19 PM
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I really like the last one of the two old Ladies walking away. Good little set this.

John Smile

Rende
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18 Mar 2008 - 6:45 PM
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Wonderful set Moira. My favourite is V1 because of the composition and the trains in the background. Also some excellent carved calligraphy.
I loved your imaginative comment on my upload.
Rende

TyChee
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18 Mar 2008 - 6:48 PM
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1 and 3 for me. What is going on with that statue in the background of number 3? Smile

Ty

mrswoolybill
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18 Mar 2008 - 6:50 PM
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That's The Lovers, Ty - the one that I didn't photograph... Sad I shall go back again...

Norma
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18 Mar 2008 - 6:57 PM
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Like them all Moira, but No.2 if I had to choose

Norma

nickyv32
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18 Mar 2008 - 7:50 PM
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All great shots No. 2 for me though.

Nicky

rmr
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18 Mar 2008 - 7:53 PM
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wonderful shots super colours and crop
mark

roverrat
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18 Mar 2008 - 8:28 PM
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Lovely series, no. 2 is my favourite.
Alexandra

SandraKay
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18 Mar 2008 - 8:29 PM
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I love the formats of V1 and V2 but for me V2 just has the edge because of the expression of the 2 ladies. Excellent timing, Moira.
Sandra

bayleaf
18 Mar 2008 - 9:31 PM
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Love this Moira. Super detail. 1 and 2 for me.

John.

Hop-A-Long
18 Mar 2008 - 9:32 PM
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These are great Moira. I have to say though, I find #3 wonderful.
Andy

superb Moira, really have missed your work and your write ups

rgds
Dave

banehawi
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18 Mar 2008 - 10:35 PM
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I like your combo shots, - its like going on a trip for me without leaving home.

W

Peteward
18 Mar 2008 - 10:57 PM
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Nice shot,Like how all the eurostars are lined up.The only thing i don't like is the place,As I drive trains into this place most days,East midlands trains.

Pete

digiray63
18 Mar 2008 - 11:19 PM
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No4 has my vote, wonderful shots.
Ray

pamelajean
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18 Mar 2008 - 11:25 PM
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I like them all, Moira, but V3 is the one I keep coming back to.

Nigel_95
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19 Mar 2008 - 12:21 AM
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I like 2, 3, and 4 best Moira. I would like 1 more if it had a bit more space between his hat and the top of the frame.

Nigel

tigertimb
19 Mar 2008 - 12:23 AM
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Excellent sequence Moira; #2 feels a little too cramped to me, but I love the composition in the other 3 and the story running through the shots
Tim

So glad to hear you plan to go back for the Lovers.
Aren't kids ungrateful? You make all that effort to visit a polluted place where the price of cosmopolitan life is grey snot, and they won't even let you play tourist for a while!
I would make it a proviso of any future visit Wink.
Lucy

danbrann
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19 Mar 2008 - 11:11 AM
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The idea to shoot from behind was inspierational Moira. The inclusion of the lookers on is a great bonus.

davidhu
19 Mar 2008 - 12:26 PM
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Good series, Moira. Pleased you included V4 as this is my fave.
Dave

imagio
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19 Mar 2008 - 9:09 PM
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Superb compositions Moira

Bernie

sandrish
19 Mar 2008 - 9:15 PM
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Definitely No 1 for me but No 3 is also interesting!

Sandra

Dynamite, love everything about it

TonyFrith
25 Mar 2008 - 7:14 AM
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No 3 for me
Tony

fwatts
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nice shot kid is that my mum jn the red coat ha ha frank

Glostopcat
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30 Mar 2008 - 2:18 PM
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A classic series Moira, every image is a winner

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