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Same as in earlier pictures.Smile just vhilling with my model, taking pictures in the forest and just enjoying the day.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon PowerShot A3300IS
Lens:5.0 - 25.0 mm (35 mm equivalent: 26.3 - 131.4 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:21 Sep 2012 - 6:39 PM
Focal Length:5mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/2.8
Shutter Speed:1/30sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:250
Metering Mode:Evaluative
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:sleeping awake beauty.
Username:katarr katarr
Uploaded:26 Sep 2012 - 12:50 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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ripleysalien
26 Sep 2012 - 1:11 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

For me, nice idea, too many distracting grasses in front of the subject, the horizon is wonky which for me is distracting and if your gonna chop the legs off, Ide go above the knee or leave all in as it looks fragmented and awkward.
Than said, pretty girl nice pose, good idea, just needs a little work.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10933 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2947 Constructive Critique Points
26 Sep 2012 - 7:45 PM

Another nice idea. Like just walking in the forest and finding someone lying down. Except alive!

Best to crop above the knees as mentioned, just seems to look better, and a slightly warmer tone can help as in the mod.


Regards

Willie

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paulbroad
paulbroad  782 forum posts United Kingdom875 Constructive Critique Points
27 Sep 2012 - 9:03 AM

Nice shot but needs the grass away from her face and there is a heavy cyan cast. I would warm it up a bit.

Paul

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