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Another image from Bentley Wildfowl and Motor Museum yesterday.
Thanks for taking the time to look,
Mark.

Camera:EOS 400D
Lens:Sigma 70-300mm
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Smooth Landing
Username:mark1309 mark1309
Uploaded:28 May 2008 - 10:35 AM
Tags:Bentley wildfowl, General, Wildlife / nature
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snapper036
28 May 2008 - 10:43 AM
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pin sharp
well done

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Igloo
5
United Kingdom
28 May 2008 - 11:01 AM
0

Great pic - nice flapping! You've really caught the movement.

deavilin
28 May 2008 - 11:03 AM
0

Nice one love the movement in the wings Smile

Charlotte

janet
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27 forum posts England
28 May 2008 - 11:03 AM
0

Well captured Mark! I love the expression on his face.

Jan.

whiteswan01
28 May 2008 - 12:07 PM
0

wow great shot i just get a blurr so well done Dawn

Shroomer
28 May 2008 - 12:17 PM
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Well timed and captured
Richard

kris_welsh
28 May 2008 - 12:22 PM
0

PERFECT timing! shame the end of the wing is cropped. Outstading image nevertheless!

challicew
28 May 2008 - 12:23 PM
0

Brilliant capture!

mark1309
28 May 2008 - 12:57 PM
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Quote: PERFECT timing! shame the end of the wing is cropped. Outstading image nevertheless!

Hi Kris, the cropping was something I was not sure about, there is a leaf over the end of the wing and I decided to crop that out, but here is the original version (V2), I'm still unsure which is the best.
Mark.

pascalg
pascalg (e2 Member)
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37 forum postspascalg vcard France
28 May 2008 - 3:16 PM
0

splendid capture !
slightly prefer #1...

Photospot
28 May 2008 - 3:39 PM
0

Very interesting capture!

LuzDeNoche
28 May 2008 - 4:34 PM
0

Great capture. I like the tighter crop in this instance.
Smile Lucy

Excellent shot Mark, well captured

Mark

TonyFrith
28 May 2008 - 8:11 PM
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I go along with the rest the tighter crop is good
Tony

dathersmith
dathersmith (e2 Member)
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526 forum postsdathersmith vcard England12 Constructive Critique Points
28 May 2008 - 9:05 PM
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Love the movement in the wings, well captured.

Darren.

tigertimb
29 May 2008 - 1:03 AM
0

Excellent action shot Mark, such wonderful motion in the wings; definitely #2 for me as it's nice to see the context and the whole wing
Tim

GeorgeRusky
29 May 2008 - 10:29 AM
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Hi Mark,
everyting that I'm going to say further reflects only my personal opinion and under any sircumstamces can be accepted as something more than that Smile
---------
"...but here is the original version (V2), I'm still unsure which is the best."
You are right Mark, the second is better and that is why:
-it gives the whole atmosphere of the nature where this bird feels at home;
-the leaf in the image (something that brings you most at the state of hesitation) tells us that you, the author, do not change the natural environment to make it look different due to your own imagination of how it will look more attractive.
-the main subject of the image dominates and nothing distracts our attention from it. You leave it for the viewer to choose where to fix their attention. There will always be someone who sees far from what you wish them to see Smile
-proportionally it also balanced better. On the first pic the bird is too big.
Thank you for reading
Sincerely
George

Last Modified By GeorgeRusky at 29 May 2008 - 10:30 AM
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nickyv32
nickyv32 (e2 Member)
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135 forum postsnickyv32 vcard England
29 May 2008 - 2:15 PM
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No 2 for me as well, glad you said he was landing, thought for a minute he had gone mad.... Great shot.

Nicky

lifesnapper
lifesnapper (e2 Member)
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lifesnapper vcard England
29 May 2008 - 4:32 PM
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Great image, very well caught.
And yes, I did give her the web address Mark, I hope she likes them. Got another 3 going on tomorrow.
All the best,

John Smile

SKavanagh
29 May 2008 - 5:48 PM
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Excellent capture Mark No 2 for me
Steve

dmhuynh72
dmhuynh72 (e2 Member)
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dmhuynh72 vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
29 May 2008 - 10:15 PM
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brillaint capture and well done

Sezz
Sezz (e2 Member)
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615 forum postsSezz vcard England15 Constructive Critique Points
29 May 2008 - 11:00 PM
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Excellent movement captured in the wings, V2 for me also Mark.

Sarah *

VNelson
30 May 2008 - 8:17 PM
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I like both renditions but edge toward #2 as it shows more of the surroundings.

Verne

A Booth
A Booth (e2 Member)
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A Booth vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jun 2008 - 6:25 PM
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excellent timed and composed images.

mark1309
2 Jun 2008 - 8:54 PM
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Thank you everyone for your comments and valuable advice on this one, they are appreciated,
Mark.

gary_d
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482 forum posts Wales12 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jun 2008 - 9:57 PM
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2 for me a stunning shot, well done. - gary

Sahyadri
3 Jun 2008 - 7:30 PM
0

WOW.... cant decide which one i like better cos both are soo good

nice shot

robert5
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62 forum posts United Kingdom
9 Jun 2008 - 9:33 AM
0

Great shot and good colours and good use of shutter speed.

sunshot
13 Jun 2008 - 4:57 PM
0

what a brilliant capture, well done.

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