snow on leave

CathR (Critique Team)

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11 Feb 2012 - 4:23 PM

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Some interesting textures here with the snow and the leaves plus the blades of grass. The depth of field is very shallow - just a thin line a bit lower than half way up where things are in focus. Otherwise it's pretty much out of focus. I am not sure what you want me to look at - in other words what the most important part of the shot is for you. The best photographers guide you round their photographs by identifying the most important elements and then drawing your attention to them in a variety of ways - making an element sharp when everything else is blurred, possibly using colour, position in the frame etc. It can be quite subtle sometimes. Otherwise the eye just roams a bit aimlessly round the shot.

here I would have tried to find a nice shape of leaf or colour perhaps against the snow with not too much competition from other leaves around about. Frame the shot so that the leaf is in a prominent position, most likely following the rule of thirds. This should give you a better composition.

Best wishes

Catherine

christinecilia

12 Feb 2012 - 4:06 PM

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hi thanks for your comment i under stand whot you are saying , next time i will try and get a better subject and get that more in focos christine