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Still finding my way with the camera, so any feedback will be appreciated.....

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Title:Snowy Water
Username:wilderhearty wilderhearty
Uploaded:21 Feb 2010 - 7:24 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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strawman
strawman  1021991 forum posts United Kingdom16 Constructive Critique Points
21 Feb 2010 - 11:07 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I like elements of the image. The white hill side, the wall winding its way past the frosty trees.

My advice would be to think of composition. what attracts the eye, what leads it through the picture. So when I look to the hill I see the wall winding on its way and I linger to see more.

The composition in the lower half of the picture is not so clear to me.

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strawman  1021991 forum posts United Kingdom16 Constructive Critique Points
21 Feb 2010 - 11:18 PM

I came because I thought a mod may help. I sort of see two images, so here they are

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wilderhearty
22 Feb 2010 - 12:57 PM

Thanks strawman, very useful comments. Didnt even think about cropping the hills in to a seperate pic !!!

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