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old stone bridge stirling not much edit shot as raw crop slight sharpen

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 550D
Lens:10.0 - 22.0 mm (35 mm equivalent: 15.9 - 34.9 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:11 Jun 2010 - 9:52 AM
Focal Length:17mm
Aperture:f/13.0
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:-2.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Evaluative
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:SO HERE IS MY IMPRESSION OF A SCAPER
Username:youmightlikethis youmightlikethis
Uploaded:12 Dec 2011 - 8:13 PM
Tags:General, Landscape / travel
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Jestertheclown
12 Dec 2011 - 9:35 PM

A bit of a departure for you Ian!

It's a pleasant enough image but it does need straightening a bit and it's a bit flat.
I've added a mod. in which I've erm, straightened it, increased the exposure a touch using levelas and added some contrast via an "S" curve.
I think that what it really needs is a focal point like a duck or a swan on the water.
Hope this helps.

Bren.

Last Modified By Jestertheclown at 12 Dec 2011 - 9:35 PM

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10933 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2945 Constructive Critique Points
12 Dec 2011 - 9:53 PM

Two good shots. Both a tad flat, needing just a little more contrast.

Added a higher contrast version of V1, and gave you a load of a Swan...


Willie

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Jestertheclown
12 Dec 2011 - 9:59 PM

Perhaps, when I say I've uploaded a mod., I should actually upload it!

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youmightlikethis
youmightlikethis e2 Member 121021 forum postsyoumightlikethis vcard Scotland
13 Dec 2011 - 4:15 AM

thanks

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paulbroad
paulbroad  782 forum posts United Kingdom872 Constructive Critique Points
13 Dec 2011 - 8:29 AM

V1 is by far the better image compositionally, anfd very pleasant indeed. It does give the impression of leanng quite strongly to the left though?

Paul

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swanseamale47
13 Dec 2011 - 3:28 PM

A nice shot, personally I'd go a bit darker and a bit more contrast, but it's all down to personal taste at the end of the day.
I have uploaded a mod to show you how I see it.
Wayne

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