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Title:Someone else.....
Username:Snappypappy Snappypappy
Uploaded:13 Jul 2014 - 7:32 AM
Tags:Cherries, Death, General, Lost love
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TanyaH
TanyaH Critique Team 11615 forum postsTanyaH vcard United Kingdom69 Constructive Critique Points
14 Jul 2014 - 10:56 AM

I love the idea and the presentation. The exposure could do with a tweak, as it's slightly under (your white background is more grey than white).

It might just be my eyes, but there's an odd perspective in the middle and right hand images, almost as though when you've resized it to fit into the space you haven't constrained the proportions? If you are free-transforming something to fit within a specific boundary or space, remember to hold down the shift key (Photoshop on a PC) as you drag a corner for resizing - that will keep the original proportions the same.

Otherwise, I like it.

Looking at your title and your tags, there's a story in here that goes beyond the obvious ... together in the first image, disconnected in the second and withered and alone in the last one. I didn't see the connection at first, but now that I have done, I think it's a very well thought out concept. A couple of tweaks to the trio of images and it would be even better Smile

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Snappypappy
Snappypappy e2 Member 1Snappypappy vcard United Kingdom
14 Jul 2014 - 4:38 PM

Thanks TanyaH.

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