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Another image of South Bruny lighthouse from a recent trip to Tasmania.

Would love some critique/comments on image anf processing (Lightroom 4)

Thanks

Dave

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 600D
Lens:EF24-105mm F/4L IS USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:4 Jan 2013 - 1:17 PM
Focal Length:75mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/400sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:As Shot
Title:South Bruny Lighthouse
Username:david1810 david1810
Uploaded:1 Mar 2013 - 12:45 AM
Tags:Architecture, General, Landscape / travel
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AndreaJean
1 Mar 2013 - 12:43 PM

nice shot, dave!

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iancrowson
iancrowson e2 Member 4204 forum postsiancrowson vcard United Kingdom128 Constructive Critique Points
1 Mar 2013 - 1:12 PM

Nice record type image. Interesting sky and view point. I like this more than last one of this lighthouse. I think its works better seeing more of the white building and without the out of focus grass.
I've done a mod where I've cropped to make lighthouse more prominent and removed different coloured grass. I also straightened as the light house did not look quite vertical.
Ian

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom827 Constructive Critique Points
1 Mar 2013 - 4:25 PM

Decent pictorial record. If absolute accuracy is not important, I would clone off the second building as before. You have two subjects, a primary and secondary.

Paul

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