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Warszawa / Warsaw - Polska / Poland

Thanks for viewing my image, I hope that you like it.

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Camera:Canon EOS 40D
Lens:canon EF85mm f/1.8 USM
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Focal Length:85
Aperture:f/7.1
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
ISO:200
Flash:no
Title:Spiders
Username:Szturmowiec Szturmowiec
Uploaded:28 Oct 2012 - 5:29 PM
Tags:Architecture, People, Poland, Skyscrapers, Spiders, Warsaw
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Chinga
Chinga e2 Member 3Chinga vcard United Kingdom
28 Oct 2012 - 5:45 PM

Excellent shot! Well seen. I love the angular look. IB

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senn
senn e2 Member 3senn vcard Belgium1 Constructive Critique Points
28 Oct 2012 - 6:02 PM

great capture ..

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10845 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2833 Constructive Critique Points
28 Oct 2012 - 6:07 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I like the geometry, lines and angle; I like the top right corner where the building exits; everything is square and straight; but the focal point, - the climbers, is hard to see, for me anyway.


So the only approach I can see is to lighten the shadows, and crop some space from the bottom, making a more panoramic aspect, as Ive done in the modification.



regards



Willie

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cats_123 e2 Member 104017 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
28 Oct 2012 - 8:11 PM

great shot Smile

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom850 Constructive Critique Points
29 Oct 2012 - 5:00 PM

Initially a strong image, but then I find it a little difficult to identify what is going on. Probably makes more sense on a much larger image.

Pauk

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