Login or Join Now

Upload your photos, chat, win prizes and much more

Username:
Password:
Remember Me

Can't Access your Account?

New to ePHOTOzine? Join ePHOTOzine for free!

Splash in Blue

Gallery > Splash in Blue

Join Now

Join ePHOTOzine, the friendliest photography community.

Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more for free!

Add Comment

Freezing water droplets was a challenge at my local village photography class and I enjoyed every second of the work, this is another variation on the same theme.

Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony Alpha SLT-A77
Lens:DT 16-50mm F2.8 SSM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:20 Nov 2012 - 4:13 PM
Focal Length:40mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/16.0
Shutter Speed:1/60sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:640
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:On, Return detected
White Balance:As Shot
Title:Splash in Blue
Username:PeterWoodham PeterWoodham
Uploaded:4 Dec 2012 - 6:58 PM
Tags:Digital art, Flowers & plants, Specialist / abstract
VS Mode Rating 98 (43.33% won)
These stats show the percentage of wins and the rating score that your photo has achieved. You can go to the VS Mode by clicking on this icon.

Signup to e2

Signup to e2 to see which photo this has won or lost against in the vs mode
Votes:Voting Disabled
Critque wantedCritique Wanted
Has Modifications Modifications Welcome (Upload a Modification)
Awards have been disabled on this photo

Comments

Sooty_1
Sooty_1 (Critique Team)
2
962 forum posts United Kingdom161 Constructive Critique Points
4 Dec 2012 - 8:51 PM
0

Nice idea, and as I expect you found, hard to capture effectively. This seems to be underexposed... I would expect these colours to be much more vibrant. Better to use an aperture of f/8 or so, for this instead of f/16, and if using your flash in auto ttl, I suggest dialling in a bit of positive exposure compensation on the flash. The red, green and blue should leap off the screen. Some can be recovered in processing, so I expect a mod will come along soon.

Other small points, the rose should be lower in the frame and all of it included...you have clipped the top leaf here. Better to frame more loosely when you aren't sure exactly where the action is going to be. On the other hand, its easy to practice this at home. Good try, just a few tweaks.

Nick

Sponsored Links
Sponsored Links
4 Dec 2012 - 10:04 PM

Join ePHOTOzine for free and remove these adverts.

banehawi
banehawi (Critique Team)
8
521 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2128 Constructive Critique Points
4 Dec 2012 - 10:04 PM
0

Nick speaks, and a mod appears!


Nothing to add to Nicks feedback apart from the mod, - looked at least a full stop underexposed. I think you probably pushed up the saturation to try to recover the shot, as I had to de saturate a lot to get it right.

Check your histogram view on your LCD after a shot, you will jnow right away if the exposure is right.

http://www.luminous-landscape.com/tutorials/understanding-series/understanding-h...



Regards


Willie

Focus_Man
5 Dec 2012 - 9:44 AM
0

Willie speaks and there is nothing left to say.

Frank

paulbroad
5 Dec 2012 - 5:23 PM
0

The idea is very good indeed, the logo is not. It does look very under exposed resulting in a heavy blue/cyan cast. You put digital art so I suspect you have been playing with the colours here. I think that might have been a mistake. Would prefer the base image with correct colours and saturation, that would have been really good.

Paul

Richsr
Richsr (e2 Member)
6
88 forum postsRichsr vcard England177 Constructive Critique Points
19 Dec 2012 - 10:40 AM
0

Some good advice from Willie and Nick

netta1234
netta1234 (e2 Member)
1
netta1234 vcard Wales1 Constructive Critique Points
25 Dec 2012 - 11:44 AM
0

Lovely image,thank's for your vote on my image on Christmas day
Nadolig Llawen
NettaSmile

pdcche
pdcche (e2 Member)
2
pdcche vcard United Kingdom
28 Dec 2012 - 11:10 PM
0

Great shot, Peter..

morpheus1955
morpheus1955 (e2 Member)
6
morpheus1955 vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
1 Jan 2013 - 12:08 PM
0

Cracking shot, very clever like it Smile

Hugh

- Original Poster Comments
- Your Posts

Add a Comment

You must be a member to leave a comment

Username:
Password:
Remember me:
Un-tick this box if you want to login each time you visit.