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I wanted to show how colorful the world is in the spring

Camera:Canon EOS 400D
Lens:EF-S 55-250mm 1:4-5.6 IS
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:spring
Username:123123 123123
Uploaded:11 May 2008 - 8:58 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Portraits / people, Wildlife / nature
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SuziBlue
SuziBlue  1116195 forum posts Scotland10 Constructive Critique Points
13 May 2008 - 7:27 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Lovely bright vivid colours and a real treat for the eyes.

You've asked for critique, and my feeling is that the two little spikes on the lower edge could be cloned out as they're not integral to the shot. It also might be worth seeing if you can push the yellow tulips slightly more out of focus just to bring the red ones even further out.

I don't think this needs to be cropped although it's always worth experimenting with crops - and if you can get the subject framed well at the time of the shoot so much the better.

I think too that it depends on what the shot is going to be used for - whether it's a record shot, one to put on a card, stock photography, etc etc so I don't always think one can be definite in one's critique in terms of format unless the intended purpose of the shot is clear. You've said that this is to show the wonderful colours of spring - woks for me.

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