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Looking at a old rope, thats worn its way through it's holding post. Taken on the side of the river Orwell in Pin Mill near Ipswich.

Camera:Nikon D100 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikkor 18-35mm Check out Nikon Nation!
Title:Stability
Username:MattmanB MattmanB
Uploaded:7 Oct 2006 - 11:06 AM
Tags:1, 2, 3, Black, Black & white, Cool, Depth, Interesting, Landscape / travel, Natural, Photo journalism, Sharp, Unusual, White
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helenam
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7 Oct 2006 - 12:51 PM

this is a very stylish shot, I might have tried to change my angle to try to get the two posts a little closer together as there seems to be more "weight" on the right hand side of the shot, well done nevertheless.... it's a very classy image.

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joolsb
joolsb e2 Member 1027115 forum postsjoolsb vcard Switzerland38 Constructive Critique Points
7 Oct 2006 - 1:36 PM

This is quite an ambitious shot to pull off successfully - so well done for trying. I agree with Helen that the comp needs to be tighter - or the far fencepost needs to be sharper.

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whipspeed
whipspeed e2 Member 104064 forum postswhipspeed vcard United Kingdom22 Constructive Critique Points
7 Oct 2006 - 4:37 PM

Agree with other posters, I would like to see a greater DOF on the front post so you get the texture of the rope.

Sarah

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Tooth
Tooth e2 Member 95772 forum postsTooth vcard Ireland227 Constructive Critique Points
8 Oct 2006 - 1:31 PM

We all seem to be in agreement here- it's a powerful subject and a good subject for DOF and selective focus - it's just the level of it that's subjective. I'd personally like to see more sharpness in the rope, but the far post not to be quite as blurred - it looks to much like motion blur the way it is at the moment, (though i know it's not.

I'd also be tempted to sewwp the burn brush across the sky a few times just bring out a bit more detail in it

Stephen

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