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Mercedes Benz museum, Stuttgart, Germany. One of the lighted staircase of the huge eight story building. Rendered in an abstract form. I welcome the community's valued feed back on this. Thanks for your time!

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18.0-200.0 mm f/3.5-5.6
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:1 Jun 2012 - 4:59 PM
Focal Length:26mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:-1.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Shutter speed priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:Steps
Username:Apurva Apurva
Uploaded:15 Aug 2012 - 7:39 AM
Tags:Architecture, Digital art, General, Specialist / abstract
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Tibetan
15 Aug 2012 - 7:53 AM
1

A splendid abstract very clever lighting like it, regards Leon.GrinGrinGrinGrinGrinGrin

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pamelajean
pamelajean (Critique Team)
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537 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1313 Constructive Critique Points
15 Aug 2012 - 5:47 PM
0

A simple and yet very effective abstract style image, Apurva. However, I didn't think it was simple when I first saw it because I felt it was like an optical illusion, I just couldn't figure out your point-of-view, until eventually my eyes made sense of it. I think the illusion's strength lies in the lights within the step fronts and the way they trick the eye, with the reflection of that light on the shiny black surface of the steps. There will be some people who "see" it straightaway, but not me. Very clever, I like it a lot.
My only little niggle is the fact that the symmetry is out, and I wonder if there is someone more clever than me who can put it right. I did have a go, but failed. There is a very slight tilt to the top of some of the steps, but not all. Then there is more space on the left than there is on the right, which a simple crop to the left doesn't correct without the top step shifting out of centre. Not an easy one to photograph without standing dead centre and using the camera's grid lines.
Pamela.

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banehawi
banehawi (Critique Team)
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523 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2188 Constructive Critique Points
15 Aug 2012 - 7:43 PM
1

Another beautiful abstract. Vibrant, and just the right amount of visual cues to confuse the viewer, as a good abstract should.

The perspective distortion can be corrected as in the mod, however, may not be necessary in an abstract to have symmetry, - depends on personal taste I think.



Regards



Willie

Apurva
17 Aug 2012 - 8:19 AM
0

Thanks you Pamela and Banehawi for a detailed critique and taking time!

pamelajean
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537 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1313 Constructive Critique Points
19 Aug 2012 - 7:33 PM
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Well done, Willie.

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