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picture taken while stood on a breaker.

Camera:Nikon D300S Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:VR 55-200
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Stood on a breaker
Username:DLBphoto DLBphoto
Uploaded:1 Apr 2010 - 7:41 PM
Tags:Beach, Breaker, General, Groin, Landscape / travel, Wildlife / nature
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saeidNL
saeidNL  4 Netherlands3 Constructive Critique Points
1 Apr 2010 - 7:41 PM

beautiful image and great composition.
saeid

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Natzdad
Natzdad  529 forum posts United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
1 Apr 2010 - 7:43 PM

nice,,,,,,,Mick

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MB63
MB63  5 England
1 Apr 2010 - 8:23 PM

Nice shot!
Marc

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clicknimagine

you have a lovely point of view in this shot, love the lead in too, but compositionally it would have been better, if you had considered a few points,

the lines are leading the eye to the outside of the scene, it would have been better if you had given some space there in the expense of the foreground where the blurred post has a slight distraction, the foreground posts are not clearly in focus, and you point of focus is on the 5th, 6th, 7th, 8th posts and around that area, if you count it from the foreground,

i have uploaded a modification here, i have adjusted the level, because your image is looking slightly overexposed to me, and cropped out the lower part of the image slightly otherwise your image will be very small, i have also increased the sharpness a bit, but i am unable to do any other thing,

wish you best of luck for your future works...

Last Modified By clicknimagine at 2 Apr 2010 - 8:20 AM

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom825 Constructive Critique Points
2 Apr 2010 - 8:35 AM

I do prefer the mod moving the breakwater to the side. You needed to remove the tiny bit of breakwater at the bottom,and include the end as a stop point at the top.

Otherwise quite a strong image. I often think, simple is best.

Paul

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