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pic friend of mine. when we were hunting at the middle of night
v2 is the color version.
which one do you like?

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 550D
Lens:EF50mm f/1.8 II
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:20 May 2012 - 12:56 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.8
Aperture:f/1.8
Shutter Speed:1/60sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:1600
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Stop it!
Username:adentenur adentenur
Uploaded:21 May 2012 - 4:49 PM
Tags:Black & white, Black and white, People, Portraits / people
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10875 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2875 Constructive Critique Points
21 May 2012 - 4:59 PM

I like the mono. I also like the bokeh discs, but some viewers will look at them as distractions rather than enhancements. I would like to see his fave slightly brighter, and sharpener, and it can benefit with a little space cropped from the top, as in the mod. I tilted the mod a little more too, - the tilt is something I like, - gives the shot a more dynamic feel than a straight shot.



Regards


Willie

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Deep_Bhatia
21 May 2012 - 5:08 PM

I like the color because of the shade of orange color on the face which adds to the happy mood. Deep

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adentenur
adentenur  2 Indonesia
21 May 2012 - 6:41 PM

@banehawi
is the bokeh disc not inthe right place?
what do you mean by tilt?

@deep bhatia
thx!

Ade.

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10875 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2875 Constructive Critique Points
21 May 2012 - 8:27 PM

The bokeh is great, like it.

The tilt, - youve taken the shot at an angle, tilting the shot towards the left. In the mod, I increased the tilt a little more.


W

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pablophotographer

Nice composition and lines play, vertical, horizontal, diagonal, a play of light and shadow. Monochrome for me brings in this occasion the best out of it.

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