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Just having a play. Not sure if it works

Camera:Pentax Check out PENTAXPORTAL!
Title:Strips and Squares
Username:lonely_oryx lonely_oryx
Uploaded:7 May 2008 - 7:38 AM
Tags:Digital art, Digitally manipulated, Squares, Strips
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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7391 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom957 Constructive Critique Points
7 May 2008 - 8:02 AM

Fun, original idea, I think it would be stronger without the two blank triangles top left and right - it needs a consistent background.
Moira

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BarbaraR
BarbaraR  8 England1 Constructive Critique Points
7 May 2008 - 8:10 AM

Certainly an eye catcher.
Good work.

B.

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MandsH
MandsH  7 England
7 May 2008 - 8:16 AM

It does work, great contrasts
Mandy

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exposure
exposure e2 Member 101307 forum postsexposure vcard England
7 May 2008 - 8:16 AM

A Brilliant contrasting image of patterns and lines and a great black and white image.
Pauline.

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whiteswan01
7 May 2008 - 8:28 AM

very well done Dawn

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Milla
Milla  6 United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
7 May 2008 - 8:33 AM

It does work to me damn well! Good idea, purely classy work. Made me smile, good start of a day Smile

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pluckyfilly
pluckyfilly e2 Member 7282 forum postspluckyfilly vcard United Kingdom33 Constructive Critique Points
7 May 2008 - 8:56 AM


Quote: Fun, original idea, I think it would be stronger without the two blank triangles top left and right - it needs a consistent background.
Moira

I think its a great idea but might go with MrsWooley on this one

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ShedMan
ShedMan  8 South Africa2 Constructive Critique Points
7 May 2008 - 9:02 AM

Very good idea and well executed but I agree with the first comment about the non-checked areas at the top. What's next, a cheetah on a striped background? Smile

ŌæŌ

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Silverzone
7 May 2008 - 9:10 AM

Strikingly different. Sylvia

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JudeC
JudeC  7 England3 Constructive Critique Points
7 May 2008 - 9:10 AM

Hi - great image works well - Jude.

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imander
imander  7388 forum posts United Kingdom7 Constructive Critique Points
7 May 2008 - 9:26 AM

how to confuse a zebra.....lol...excellent stuff, well done
ian

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User_Removed
7 May 2008 - 9:42 AM

This Idea has great potential.. good work

dave

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lonely_oryx
lonely_oryx e2 Member 661 forum postslonely_oryx vcard England54 Constructive Critique Points
7 May 2008 - 9:46 AM

Thanks for all your comments. It looks like this is worth working on. I will definitely do something about the corners. Now where did I put that picture of a cheetah?

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gary_d
gary_d e2 Member 6516 forum postsgary_d vcard Wales12 Constructive Critique Points
7 May 2008 - 12:48 PM

I agree about the top but a fine image. - gary

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Scaramanga
Scaramanga e2 Member 637 forum postsScaramanga vcard United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
7 May 2008 - 1:27 PM

Great original idea, it's great to experiment. Thanks for voting so quickly on my upload, so quick it's vanished.

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ketch
ketch e2 Member 6770 forum postsketch vcard Turks and Caicos Islands50 Constructive Critique Points
7 May 2008 - 1:48 PM

THat is such a cool idea (how did you get it to stand on the chess board though!) - very imaginative indeed

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proz
proz  9205 forum posts United States
7 May 2008 - 2:04 PM

actually John, I think it works quite well, clever!!

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nickyv32
nickyv32 e2 Member 7135 forum postsnickyv32 vcard England
7 May 2008 - 2:34 PM

Nice combination, well thought out.

Nicky

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Bob_V
Bob_V  6 United States2 Constructive Critique Points
7 May 2008 - 2:46 PM

Interesting work, well done.
Bob

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pascalg
pascalg e2 Member 637 forum postspascalg vcard France
7 May 2008 - 4:28 PM

excellent and strong image...

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bunbeam
bunbeam e2 Member 8bunbeam vcard United Kingdom
7 May 2008 - 4:58 PM

brilliant idea and title, brilliant image
bunSmile

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Bodiewil
Bodiewil e2 Member 646 forum postsBodiewil vcard Wales
7 May 2008 - 4:59 PM

Clever work, now I wouldn't want to see this after a bottle of whisky Wink

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8748 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1575 Constructive Critique Points
7 May 2008 - 6:07 PM

I think it's a brilliant idea and, apart from the top corners, I would like to see the black muzzle against a white square, as it has lost its outline at the moment.

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phototime
phototime  8 United Kingdom
7 May 2008 - 6:38 PM

Excellent shot,works very well.

Mo

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jaktis
jaktis e2 Member 1080 forum postsjaktis vcard Sweden
7 May 2008 - 7:44 PM

A fun capture

Peter

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User_Removed
7 May 2008 - 8:40 PM

quite ironic i would say..nice capture
Akif

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derekv
derekv e2 Member 7derekv vcard England
7 May 2008 - 11:01 PM

I like it, John, great idea carried out superbly.
Derek

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tigertimb
tigertimb  640 forum posts United Kingdom66 Constructive Critique Points
8 May 2008 - 7:42 AM

Excellent idea and the contrast works really well making a fascintating image
Tim

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Douglas_George

Nice idea well executed.

Dougie.

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Paree
Paree  9594 forum posts3 Constructive Critique Points
8 May 2008 - 2:29 PM

interesting
and a clever idea
pareen

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BubbaG2000
8 May 2008 - 4:49 PM

These things never fail to catch the eye. A damn good effort here.

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ChrisWallace
8 May 2008 - 4:50 PM

Unusual but very effective.

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gerrymac
gerrymac  6 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
8 May 2008 - 5:47 PM

Very clever,nice one
Gerry

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johnlw
johnlw e2 Member 7johnlw vcard United Kingdom10 Constructive Critique Points
9 May 2008 - 10:52 PM

I like this idea as it really stands out
Regards John

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Marian
Marian  862 forum posts England
13 Jun 2008 - 8:22 AM

Did you ever get to alter to top left and right corners? I think the conbination works well and with those corners done, it will make this image more dramatic.
Marian

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lonely_oryx
lonely_oryx e2 Member 661 forum postslonely_oryx vcard England54 Constructive Critique Points
13 Jun 2008 - 10:32 AM

Thanks Marian. I have got it on my list of things to do.

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