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Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D200 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-70mm f/3.5-4.5 G
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:10 Sep 2011 - 1:50 PM
Focal Length:70mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.4
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:Sun bather at White Rock BC CA
Username:DouglasMorley DouglasMorley
Uploaded:9 Oct 2011 - 8:59 PM
Tags:Candid portrait, Portraits / people, Seaside, Sunbather
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Jestertheclown
9 Oct 2011 - 10:28 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

This is a pretty good record of a day in the sun!
The road in the background is a bit of a distraction though, as is the girl in the water.
I've uploaded a mod. in which I've ctroped the top and RHS, removing the road and I've cloned out the girl.
I've also increased the contrast very slightly and sharpened it prior to uploading. That's not to say that your shot is unnecessarily soft, rather that my mods. always seem to suffer during the upload.
There appear to be some areas of discolouration in the water. Reflections perhaps?
Hope this helps.

Bren.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom851 Constructive Critique Points
12 Oct 2011 - 7:49 AM

This is a fine well composed candid, but you did need that bit of work. Clone out the girl on the right and crop the top to remove the road etc.

Paul

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