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I have tried to capture the glare of the sun along with it's tranquil mood. This was taken 1/9/11 at Foremark Reservoir near Derby. Any advice good or bad on how to improve this shot would be very welcome.
Thanks
Martin
| Brand: | Nikon CORPORATION |
| Camera: | Nikon D3100 |
| Lens: | 18 - 55 |
| Recording media: | JPEG (digital) |
| Date Taken: | 1 Sep 2011 - 6:03 PM |
| Focal Length: | 34mm |
| Lens Max Aperture: | f/4.9 |
| Aperture: | f/14.0 |
| Shutter Speed: | 1/800sec |
| Exposure Comp: | -2/3 |
| ISO: | 100 |
| Exposure Mode: | Program AE |
| Metering Mode: | Multi-segment |
| Flash: | No Flash |
| Title: | Sundown Stroll |
| Username: | |
| Uploaded: | 4 Sep 2011 - 9:00 AM |
| Tags: | General, Landscape / travel, Wildlife / nature |
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| Votes: | 11 |
Comments
The light and silhouette is spot on, and I like the way you have framed it using the branches, but the frame is a little heavy and dominates the image rather than presents it. Technically I don't think there is anything to improve other than this little bit of compositioni it is an excellent shot.
Steve
When human figures are introduced into an image they tend to take a disproportionate emphasis to their size. As such I think the framing is spot on with three (magical number) sections of equal standing. I don't think the image would have the same balance if you cut down (figuratively not literally) the foliage. I might slice a little of the bottom black but overall I think this is a lovely silhouette, well composed and executed.
(I do stand to be corrected and will apologize profusely to Steve when you prove me wrong on your next visit)
Dave
The first thing i noticed were the couple, I thought what a peaceful place they have to go for a walk.on canvas it would be a master piece,enjoy it
Billy
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