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taken at sussex at sunrise

Title:sunrise
Username:taylorjane taylorjane
Uploaded:9 Apr 2010 - 2:01 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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OliPackwood
9 Apr 2010 - 2:25 PM

Very nice shot, but if it was me i would have composed it so that the sun was slightly more off-centre.

Oli

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cantona43
cantona43  9915 forum posts England4 Constructive Critique Points
9 Apr 2010 - 2:38 PM

Hi Taylor, welcome to EPZ a very nice first upload I have done a mod in my opinion it looked better with the shoreline cropped out and I just added a warming filter to the value of 25% I hope you like it
Neil

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CathR
CathR  7139 forum posts United Kingdom563 Constructive Critique Points
9 Apr 2010 - 2:55 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi Taylor and welcome to EPZ. Thanks for your upload. You have created a good mood with your shot. The pastel colours in the sky and the very pale water create a tranquil scene.

I agree with Neil though that the shoreline should be removed. There is too little of it for it to be a feature in the pic.

Let us have details of your camera and the settings you used to take the shot when you next upload to the Critique Gallery. It helps us to help you better.

I hope you enjoy the site and best wishes

Catherine

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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84354 forum posts England163 Constructive Critique Points
9 Apr 2010 - 3:41 PM

Hi Taylor, welcome to EPZ! Smile

A lovely initial upload. I really like the muted colours, this is a gorgeous scene.

Because you ticked the 'Critique' box on uploading we can't actually vote on this image, but consider this a click anyway! Smile

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cats_123
cats_123 e2 Member 104233 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
9 Apr 2010 - 5:11 PM

I beg to differ about the shoreline. It creates the diagonal effect that sets this sunset off against other straighter shots Smile

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