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during the sunset time i had tried to capture the photo of two girls standing at the beach
please give your suggestions

Brand:Panasonic
Camera:Panasonic Lumix DMC-TZ15
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:11 Mar 2008 - 2:26 AM
Focal Length:8.5mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.3
Aperture:f/10.0
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Auto, Did not fire
Title:sunset at bordi
Username:bglimaye bglimaye
Uploaded:2 Jun 2012 - 7:50 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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vickyf
vickyf e2 Member 8vickyf vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
2 Jun 2012 - 9:46 AM

I love the light in this & the way you have framed the shot with the lines of the water flowing into the bottom left of the frame. I do find the pose of the girl on the right a bit awkward as she draws my eye out of the shot and the head clipping the horizon is a bit distracting, but a nice image Smile Vicky

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom850 Constructive Critique Points
3 Jun 2012 - 9:44 AM

This could be superb, but the sky is way over exposed. You must crop right down removing most of the sky and you then have a super shot with wide composition. See my mod.

Paul

Last Modified By paulbroad at 3 Jun 2012 - 9:49 AM

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