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My first attempt at using hyperfocal distance and also my first upload

Camera:Nikon D80 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-135mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Sunset Burns Beach
Username:boxman boxman
Uploaded:3 Sep 2009 - 8:09 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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Lovely image - well done.

Chris

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Henners88
Henners88  5204 forum posts United Kingdom
3 Sep 2009 - 8:14 AM

Great first upload, the sky is fantastic, if I could vote I would
Henry Smile

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Buffalo_Tom e2 Member 82322 forum postsBuffalo_Tom vcard Wales9 Constructive Critique Points
3 Sep 2009 - 8:30 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Excellent exposure but there are a few points I would like to make.
Firstly the horizon is not level,you can easily remedy this in PS or elements.Needs to be shifted to the right.
The foreground is a little cluttered.If you were able try to look for a leading angle in to the shot.I think this image would have been better if you had moved slightly to the right to give yourself a good lead in to the main body of rocks and this would also give you a natural line of the tide crashing against the rock formation.The colour and drama has been captured well.Good luck with your images and welcome to EPZ.
Excellent first posting.
Tom.

Last Modified By Buffalo_Tom at 3 Sep 2009 - 8:30 AM

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Goggz e2 Member 72301 forum postsGoggz vcard Wales72 Constructive Critique Points
9 Feb 2010 - 5:38 PM

I agree with Toffee and I also feel that it would have been nice to see more of that fabulous sky. From the hyperfocal perspective it looks fine but , being a small image it's not easy to see if everything is sharp.

Welcome aboard! I hope you enjoy yourself here Smile
Cheers, Goggz

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jimPat
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21 Jun 2010 - 11:20 AM

Stunning début ! Toffee has critiqued it well - welcome to EPZ - Regards JP

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