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this is an beautiful sunrise with fisherman's morning life which gives this image a human touch.

Camera:Nikon D80 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-135
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:suprise
Username:yasheye yasheye
Uploaded:21 Aug 2009 - 11:15 AM
Tags:Wildlife / nature
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yasheye
yasheye  4 India
21 Aug 2009 - 11:43 AM

good feel

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somnathchatterjee
21 Aug 2009 - 12:55 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

i do not know why you have made this comment to your own photo.

obviously it is a good feel and you have captured the sun very well. very nice atmosphere you have created. the person at the left side of the frame and the sun at the right side gives a good balance to your image. not many points you have left with this image to critique. but the horizontal level is not right. the space at the right side of the frame after the sun is, i think , too much to serve any purpose. but you could have cropped out slightly that part to give a better balance of the image. although you may have a different opinion but i think it would have been better if you had cloned out the other boats.

Hope it helps,
somnath

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10777 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2779 Constructive Critique Points
21 Aug 2009 - 10:16 PM

A nice shot, exposed well for the Sun. Youve captured the mood of the evening very well.

I would prefer to see some space below the fisherman, - and as Somnath mentioned, the horizon straightened.

I have modified the shot to change the format to a 10X8 by adding space and cloning quickly, and moved the fisherman slightly; increased contrast a little using a curves adjustment, and sharpened a little.


regards


Willie

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Eviscera
Eviscera  81096 forum posts United Kingdom149 Constructive Critique Points
22 Aug 2009 - 3:30 PM

great mod willie.

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mcgovernjon
25 Aug 2009 - 9:33 AM

Nice to see the other side of your personality likes it too Wink

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