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My favourite of my friends 3 dogs. A beautiful gentle giant.
Not as clear as the one i took of Mitzy.
All comments gratefully received as always Smile

Kathryn

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm FinePix S5700
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:5 Dec 2011 - 3:36 PM
Focal Length:31.3mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/3.5
Shutter Speed:1/180sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:800
Exposure Mode:Action (High speed)
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Taz
Username:kathrynlouise kathrynlouise
Uploaded:18 Dec 2011 - 6:00 PM
Tags:Pets / captive animals
Votes:Voting Disabled
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SusieH
SusieH  967 forum posts England
18 Dec 2011 - 6:46 PM

Hi Kathryn,

The background is ideal and you have positioned the dog very well in the frame. Although he is turning round, I would try to get him looking at the camera next time and perhaps shoot from the other end! You seem to have a very cold blue cast to the pic - you can correct this in PS, but I would look at the settings on your camera, particularly the white balance.

Kind regards, Sue.

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kathrynlouise e2 Member 2364 forum postskathrynlouise vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
18 Dec 2011 - 8:33 PM

Hiya Sue. Thanks for your comment and mod. Will try another on my next visit Smile

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pamelajean Critique Team 8752 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1577 Constructive Critique Points
18 Dec 2011 - 8:51 PM

I agree with Sue, Kathryn. The blue cast is probably due to an incorrect White Balance setting. It's not only on Taz's coat, but also amongst the leaves. I quite like the looking-back stance, and the pretty behindGrin. As you say, it could be sharper, especially around the muzzle area. You are doing well, though....good background, nice composition, and detail in the black coat. I used Colour Balance in my modification and also a small amount of desaturation.
Pamela.

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kathrynlouise e2 Member 2364 forum postskathrynlouise vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
18 Dec 2011 - 9:00 PM

Thankyou Pamela. All taken onboard for next attempt Smile

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pamelajean Critique Team 8752 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1577 Constructive Critique Points
18 Dec 2011 - 10:53 PM

Featured e2 photo at the moment.

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paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom842 Constructive Critique Points
19 Dec 2011 - 10:09 AM

The image itself is well composed and a good but different pose. There are technical issues. High ISO is not generally to be recommended with compact cameras and I would try and not exceed 400. You have a blue cast due to low shaded light I think and the leaves arte a bit over exposed whilst the dog is slightly under.

A problem that. Try always to expose for highlights, the background here, correcting shadows in software. Or, a burst of flash for the dog with the correct exposure for the background.

Paul

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Jestertheclown
21 Dec 2011 - 7:31 PM

Hi Katryn.
I've arrived a bit late for the party, I think!
Compositionally, this is good and something a bit different to the norm.
As you're by now aware, there's a distinct blue cast which I'd guess is due to the white balance setting in your camera.
My S5700's constantly set to "Auto" and it seems to work pretty well.
I see though that you've used the "sport/action" pre-set which, whilst it will adjust the exposure for a faster shutter speed, it doesn't necessarily give you the best possible results in terms of exposure.
As Paul says, this looks to have been exposed almost in two parts.
Also ISO 800 on that camera is higher than I ever use. Mine's set to "auto 400" most of the time which means that the camera can set the ISO it thinks is necesary but to no higher than ISO 400. That's how it works in "P", "A" or "S" mode anyway. Using "M" I think that you need to set everything yourself.
The pre-sets might overrule it though.
I've uploaded a mod. in which I've removed the blueness. I did that using the colour balance tool. Selecting blue, I de-saturated it until the blue was gone, then I increased, individually, the red and yellow channels slighly.
Finally, I tweaked it using the shadows/highlights tool.

And then I uploaded the wrong one (!) so please ignore my first ofering. The second, brighter, one is the correct one.

I think that your photography's developed (sorry!) to the point now where you can do without using the pre-sets and expose the shots using your new-found skill and judgement.
The S5700 won't give you the flexibility you'll get with a DSLR but it will allow you plenty of scope to make your own decisions regarding apertures and/or shutter speeds to get the results that you want rather than what the camera thinks that you want.
Using "P" or "programme" mode will show you how the two co-relate using the histogram in the viewfinder before you take your shot. You'll be suirprised at how quickly it all makes sense.

Then you move on again!

You're doing very well.

Cheers,

Bren.

Last Modified By Jestertheclown at 21 Dec 2011 - 7:31 PM

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kathrynlouise e2 Member 2364 forum postskathrynlouise vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
21 Dec 2011 - 11:44 PM

Thankyou Paul and Bren Grin
Do feel i'm improving and its all thanks to the help of you guys and everyone here and it is a good feeling. It is my favourite past time, shame work gets in the way lol.

Kathryn

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