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Taken on Island of Burano,in venetian lagoon. I was attracted by the contrast between washing on line and the general appearance of decay and abandonment

Camera:Canon 400d
Lens:28-135 zoom
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Tenement
Username:Pangurban Pangurban
Uploaded:31 Mar 2008 - 10:35 PM
Tags:Architecture, Burano, General, Landscape / travel, Laundry
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cats_123
cats_123 e2 Member 104004 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland24 Constructive Critique Points
31 Mar 2008 - 10:59 PM

well seen

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DaveU
DaveU e2 Member 81339 forum postsDaveU vcard England121 Constructive Critique Points
1 Apr 2008 - 8:15 AM

I like the colour and detail very much indeed. The row of washing is a lovely touch breaking up the geometry of the windows and adding a splash of contrasting colour.

Lools to me though that this just needs tidying up a bit. I would try the distort tool to stretch the image so the horizontals and verticals are "true" and also probably crop off the left side to remove the lower left window.

Just a few thoughts ........

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Chant57
Chant57 e2 Member 8371 forum postsChant57 vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
1 Apr 2008 - 4:44 PM

Very well spotted, I agree with DaveU, I feel it needs a little tidying up, so that horizontals and verticals are true, and also agree that the lower left window could be removed. The colour is good as is the detail, I like the way the shutters are open on the top row of windows and closed on the bottom row, love the window boxes of flowers, and the washing is the icing on the cake
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mbmarks
mbmarks  5 United States
1 Jul 2009 - 1:18 AM

Great composition and colour. Love the red roses as contrast to the decay.

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