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Guys kindly critic my work..I would like to know if my photo is cool ,good or excellent.you may comment more.thank you.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 7D
Lens:50.0 mm (35 mm equivalent: 79.0 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:8 Oct 2012 - 12:57 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Aperture:f/6.7
Shutter Speed:1/750sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:3200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Partial
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:thats it.
Username:auragraphic7dthelightmaster auragraphic7dthelightmaster
Uploaded:13 Oct 2012 - 5:57 AM
Tags:General, Specialist / abstract
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Hermanus
Hermanus  2 South Africa
13 Oct 2012 - 6:42 AM

Unusual subject but well photographed and nicely presented. I like it Smile

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10869 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2869 Constructive Critique Points
13 Oct 2012 - 2:25 PM

Its underexposed, and the white balance doesnt look correct to me. Ive loaded a mod. Scroll up to the mod tab.

I wonder what you were trying to achieve with this. The composition has cropped off the bottom of the front glass, and it seems it may be an exercise in depth of field, otherwise its random glasses of coke with a piece


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Willie of ice on the table top?

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom854 Constructive Critique Points
15 Oct 2012 - 7:51 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

You give us three choices. There are more. For this kind of still life you do not need high ISO, you need a tripod and a decent lighting set up. Here you need some side lighting and a backlight to add impact and a decent tonal range. Four is not a good compositional number, odd numbers work better.

I would crop to just above the second glass too, leaving the other two glasses cut off.

Paul

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auragraphic7dthelightmaster

sir PAULBROAD @THANKS ALOT FOR THIS......I HIGHLY APPRECIATE THIS.

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