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THE APPLIANCE OF THE SCIENCE

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a real snappers playground in finnieston glasgow around the science centre and glagow imax

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Title:THE APPLIANCE OF THE SCIENCE
Username:youmightlikethis youmightlikethis
Uploaded:24 Mar 2010 - 7:33 PM
Tags:Specialist / abstract
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Carabosse
Carabosse e2 Member 1139385 forum postsCarabosse vcard England269 Constructive Critique Points
25 Mar 2010 - 11:37 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi Ian. This is a decent enough capture of the 'shapes' and personally I prefer the colour version. But I am just a little doubtful of a couple of things.

Firstly, I am not sure the photo on the top right really contributes to the montage. It may have been better to have photographed a completely different structure. Secondly the presentation is, to my eye anyway, a bit heavy (the big black and white borders)and could, arguably be more imaginative. It is the borders which tend to catch the eye rather than the pictures!

In the mod I have uploaded for you I have corrected a very slight cool cast, increased contrast via a curves adjustment and, perhaps most importantly, rearranged the photos, reduced the borders and changed the black to dark grey. Obviously there could be any number of variations on the arrangement.

Hope that helps.

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youmightlikethis e2 Member 111003 forum postsyoumightlikethis vcard Scotland
26 Mar 2010 - 4:23 AM

thanks for crit and mod

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