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This is a new business center opened in front of my apartment block here in India. The courtyard between the various office units is covered by these arches made of may be thick canvas. The pattern created therein caught my attention and today morning went over and shot some pics. Posting one of them here. Your critiques and comments are most welcome. Thanks for your time!

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D700 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:70-300mm f/4-5.6 G
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:15 Aug 2012 - 11:17 AM
Focal Length:200mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.8
Aperture:f/8.0
Shutter Speed:1/640sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Shutter speed priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:The Arrow of Time
Username:Apurva Apurva
Uploaded:17 Aug 2012 - 8:24 AM
Tags:Abstract, Architecture, Black & white, Canvas, General, Office, Specialist / abstract
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Tibetan
Tibetan  2 England
16 Aug 2012 - 8:02 AM

This seems to be the in thing these day even here in the U.K. I can only say if it improves the look of things then I approve! as I do of your splendid photo, regards Leon.GrinGrinGrinGrinGrin

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Apurva
Apurva  2 India
17 Aug 2012 - 8:26 AM

Thanks Leon for your interest and appreciation!

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brianpatcham
17 Aug 2012 - 9:07 AM

Tou have caught some pleasing shapes. Well spotted.

Brian.

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NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 43500 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom105 Constructive Critique Points
17 Aug 2012 - 9:17 AM

A rather brilliant observational piece, which quickly lends it's self to a rather nice abstract.

Regards Nathan

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Deep_Bhatia
17 Aug 2012 - 10:57 AM

Great abstract shot. Deep

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banehawi Critique Team 10933 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2946 Constructive Critique Points
17 Aug 2012 - 3:27 PM

Its a very good abstract just as it is, well done


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SueEley
SueEley  8271 forum posts Wales96 Constructive Critique Points
17 Aug 2012 - 6:10 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Nice abstract, but I would crop a bit. There is dead space at the top that I fell unbalances it. I am uploading a mod, but there is a range of possible crops.

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